Topic: Angsty
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Tue 11/11/08 04:59 PM
Edited by Kaysler on Tue 11/11/08 05:01 PM
I'll be done


Lies have filled me
With this jaded state
Not really me

You tell your lies
I'll just sit and wonder
Smile in spite of myself

Why did you cry when you told me
I was the one hurt
Let the tears flow

Let the tears flow
That's what I'm here for
Just the clean up

Using my shoulder again i see
why i'm here too obviouse
You can't hurt me with the truth

Don't coat with sugar
wasting all my damn time
you ruined your chance

I'll be done with you
I am done with you
Goodbye.

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Notes: Old piece left unfinished.
Slight editing before posted.

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Tue 11/11/08 05:06 PM
Very Good.............................flowerforyou

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Tue 11/11/08 05:28 PM

Very Good.............................flowerforyou


Thank you very much rebel