Topic: Comments please
PFC0909's photo
Fri 07/31/09 07:28 PM
I thought you were different, I thought you had changed, but all i see now, is one and the same. I thought you liked me, I thought it was a start, but all I'm left with, is a hole in my heart.

You told me to trust you, To give you a chance, Now I stand here alone, As we finish this dance. A moment has passed, And you are now gone, I stand by myself, "what did I do wrong."

You say that's just life, Now ready or not, You come and you go, Without even a thought. Well now that it's over, I see all the clues, You really don't care, and now my heart's bruised.

You have the words, written right on your neck, A life you have lived, Without remorse or regret. And when you have read this, I'll already be gone, You can't ask me to stay, and live a life that's all wrong.

I've left you my heart, My soul and my dreams, Now I'm just a shell, Who's bust at the seams. I can honestly say, That through it all, Best to have loved and then lost, than to not love at all.


Sharris's photo
Fri 07/31/09 07:34 PM

I thought you were different, I thought you had changed, but all i see now, is one and the same. I thought you liked me, I thought it was a start, but all I'm left with, is a hole in my heart.

You told me to trust you, To give you a chance, Now I stand here alone, As we finish this dance. A moment has passed, And you are now gone, I stand by myself, "what did I do wrong."

You say that's just life, Now ready or not, You come and you go, Without even a thought. Well now that it's over, I see all the clues, You really don't care, and now my heart's bruised.

You have the words, written right on your neck, A life you have lived, Without remorse or regret. And when you have read this, I'll already be gone, You can't ask me to stay, and live a life that's all wrong.

I've left you my heart, My soul and my dreams, Now I'm just a shell, Who's bust at the seams. I can honestly say, That through it all, Best to have loved and then lost, than to not love at all.



It is a tale felt all too often. I hear an echo of words said before, from ancient times.

no photo
Fri 07/31/09 07:36 PM
I can actually "feel" it...very nice. flowerforyou

PFC0909's photo
Fri 07/31/09 07:37 PM
Thanks both of ya'll I just wish I was as good as showing my emotions through writing as some people on here

earthytaurus76's photo
Fri 07/31/09 07:37 PM
Edited by earthytaurus76 on Fri 07/31/09 07:38 PM
You forgot to add.. "YOU PSYCHO *****!!! I HOPE YOU FALL OFF A CLIFF!!! THANKS FOR MAKING OUT WITH MY FRIENDS!! GLAD YOULL BE THERE TIL THE END!!!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 08/01/09 02:41 PM
"Best to have loved and then lost, than to not love at all. "

A line never so true... flowerforyou