Community > Poems & Creative Writing

Previous 1 2 Next

Topic: I did not know
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 07/20/12 06:21 PM
I did not know Your lips were so soft Until I got To kiss you slow I did not know Your eyes were fathomless pools Until I got to Look lovingly into them I did not know Your mind was so deep Until I got To listen to you I did not know This stirring in my chest Until I got To realize it was you. I did not know A lot of things But let's be together And see what love brings.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 07/20/12 06:29 PM
really very nice o.h. reminds me of a song.... http://youtu.be/9B1iX33N89w

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 07/20/12 06:31 PM
Ah, a good classic.

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Fri 07/20/12 06:36 PM
Love brings, pain, regret & sorrow........ I didn't know LOVE could feel like a (HEART ATTACH) that's from a SONG!

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 07/20/12 06:39 PM
I'll still take love if I ever get it.

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Fri 07/20/12 06:42 PM
I'll settle for LUST!!! Less painful then I can tell him to get his stuff & hit the Road!

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 07/20/12 06:45 PM
Lust works but I get attached quite easily...

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Fri 07/20/12 06:50 PM
I don't have that problem...... once you have wronged me I am done! Sorry

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 07/20/12 07:01 PM
uh oh, better watch my step!

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Fri 07/20/12 07:34 PM
YEs! The last guy I was seeing on & off for 2 years well he finally came to stay with me & then he was so lazy & work, he was so damn HOT 32 dimples & DJ & Tattoo artist, only he wined about everything. One night I went to bed & told him to get his crap & get lost! Had enough of him....... So when I woke up he was gone......I scared the crap out of him! I was not joking hehehe. GUess I need a real MAN lol

Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Fri 07/20/12 07:35 PM
YEs! The last guy I was seeing on & off for 2 years well he finally came to stay with me & then he was so lazy & work, he was so damn HOT 32 dimples & DJ & Tattoo artist, only he wined about everything. One night I went to bed & told him to get his crap & get lost! Had enough of him....... So when I woke up he was gone......I scared the crap out of him! I was not joking hehehe. GUess I need a real MAN lol He called me crying ....... but I was done Just don't piss me off! lol

Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Fri 07/20/12 09:10 PM
hey...i did not know you are a romantic man?..im impressed!

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 07/21/12 02:52 AM
I don't think I have any romance in me...

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sat 07/21/12 03:08 AM
Nice write.

busokato Joined Tue 12/06/11 Posts: 34	Sat 07/21/12 03:27 AM
That Hot, take it easy!

busokato Joined Tue 12/06/11 Posts: 34	Sat 07/21/12 03:28 AM
I love this, permit me to copy this.

Kaleijoscope Joined Fri 10/15/10 Posts: 3319	Sat 07/21/12 07:33 AM
I don't think I have any romance in me... awwwww, a nice,modest, romantic man..."let's get together and see what love brings?"...subtle...

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Sat 07/21/12 08:23 AM
Now you did it!

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 07/21/12 08:38 AM


Down2earthdebbie Joined Tue 12/05/06 Posts: 6097	Sat 07/21/12 12:42 PM
Now you did it! you are do nice!