Topic: its not me your holding now.
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Mon 11/12/12 06:52 PM
The stars, say hello to you, so bright, and waiting for to shine the path for you.
But its not me your holding now.

Seas over waves that make you run on in,surrounded by memories that the sea gulls do cry and always mock you, unkept dreams over a lovers stare,but its not me your holding now.

Chemistry requests of photos,that you examined, you chose, you rose, to decide to take this strangers hand, he took your heart which your smile and photogaph couldn.t really get to know.
A broken hearts caked in deciet a love rat a cheat.
Its not me your holding now.

Think of clouds, that empty themselves into solitary dreams of holding you and holding me, mouths meet to taste the truth, clasped hands in lovers designs, making love with passion and truth .this could be you holding me...

Some people chemistry is a photo and desired words but a real truthful heart will always over turn cheating hearts and are more than solem words/
Thomas

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Mon 11/12/12 07:37 PM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Mon 11/12/12 10:01 PM
Nice write flowerforyou

Welcome to mingle and the creative writing forum.

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Fri 11/23/12 10:02 PM
Hey this was sad but a nice write also..

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Sat 11/24/12 12:36 AM
This reminds me of a certain song. Hey nice poem. I loved it :)