Topic: don't take everything so seriously all the time
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Sun 12/02/12 06:19 PM
red hair swinging out the window of your white car
my candy striper
drive drive away as fast
as your ford focus will let you
as i'll let you
drive drive drive
as fast as your focus will allow you
love love love me and tell me you love me
and sleep tonight
snore
and love me in the morning
mornings are gone
and your red hair
swinging out the white car
on a december day
with everything
in black bags in this
ugly car of mine
drive drive drive
as fast as you can little girl
candy striper
here's your ward
my affection's crucifix bent
sit atop its point
and drive drive drive
as fast as i will let you
in this parking lot
where you gave all my things to the poor
poor me
go go girl
go girl go now
drive
candy striper
here's your reward
my parting eyes
you drive drive drive
and my road ahead
is darker
than my fixated poems
and my broken heart
and my rotted brain
and my stubbled face
and really this is not a poem
but a joke
since you played one on me

and seriously
you gave me all my stuff back. where's my mp3 player?

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Sun 12/02/12 09:06 PM
You rock PP..Awesome..

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Mon 12/03/12 04:41 AM
This is a cool write, PP, especially like the ending.. :smile:

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Mon 12/03/12 12:20 PM
Cool! and i like the ending too. I think you got ripped off though.
Really captures how I remember my 20's. Letting your life get messy all for love. But it's worth it!