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Edited by
AthenaRose2
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Wed 12/19/12 05:27 AM
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I CAN”T CONCENTRATE!
How can I be in this place? this prison… with no escape from the torment behind my eyes in a world I don’t recognize and feelings I can’t disguise… I can see only one view ALWAYS… only one me only one you… This is insane and I rack my brain trying to understand how and why I came to be this way… everyday… today… tomorrow… yesterday… it’s always the same… like a broken record stuck on one track I can’t find my freedom I’ve lost my way back… obsessed with the truth… with seeing your face… with our first embrace… as with arsenic and old lace you lure me to taste… to savor each morsel take one more bite as you possess my body and take my life… NOW… buried there beyond your door beneath your floor is an inseparable love together for sure…  Copyright©AthenaRose 12/19/12 |
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Edited by
harsh2019
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Wed 12/19/12 05:39 AM
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Love does not exist in real life no matter how much we do or care we have to bear the pain
your poem is beyond perfection it is one which really speaks my heart out in words which i would never have been able to express..............its really really nice just dont have words to say for it thank you for sharing it with ua |
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Love does not exist in real life no matter how much we do or care we have to bear the pain your poem is beyond perfection it is one which really speaks my heart out in words which i would never have been able to express..............its really really nice just dont have words to say for it thank you for sharing it with ua Harsh... you are very kind and generous with your reply... thank you.. this work is one reflected off the stars in the universe... I could only write it as it compelled me... I'm so glad it resonates with you as it did me when I wrote it... 
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Hehe i liked it very much and felt i had to write back and let it known how much i liked reading it.........hope to read more of your writing soon:)
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Hehe i liked it very much and felt i had to write back and let it known how much i liked reading it.........hope to read more of your writing soon:) Once again, Harsh, I'm pleased that you enjoy and are reading my work.. thank you for posting your comments.
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Fabulous write!!! Beautiful and Tragic!!! Love your talents!!!
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I liked this one too. Well written, very expressive. The dark side of is a bit disturbing.
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MisLopez
Sinner.. glad it stirs emotion for you..
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Very predictable
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Very predictable Well, hello kooky, I haven't seen you around these parts yet... so welcome to the writers forum... yes.. i fear you are correct... this work is so predictable for the reason that it's stuck in my head and i replay it in almost everything i write.. in one way or another.. I can only surmise then that I'm truly going insane.. or the universe and my subconscious is trying to tell me something... whatever it is I hope it is revealed to me soon, becuz I hate the thought of the rest of my artistic endeavor only reflecting this one theme in a million and one more ways... lol... Anyway, now that I've vented that off my chest... thank you for stopping by, reading, and posting a reply... nice to meet you.. enjoy your experience here and have fun on the boards... 
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reminds me of my high school love...back when love was just love...pure
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reminds me of my high school love...back when love was just love...pure yes, Ray... back when love was just starting out... overwhelming and controlling us... when we were so excited to wake up every morning and get to school anticipating that excited, i missed you last night, smile and touch... until we get older and more intense... when love can turn to obsession and possession... Thank you for reading and posting on my work.. 
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the honor's all mine.
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