Topic: A brand new start...
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Fri 01/04/13 05:31 AM
Edited by AthenaRose2 on Fri 01/04/13 05:31 AM
I met you first… or was it you who found me…
wandering… lost… cold… afraid… lonely…
looking for something… right then I had nothing…
but so much love to give… so much life to get back…
eagerly opening all the doors to amusement… and so much more…
too soon I became overwhelmed in my impatience to play…
half my life gone… without true love… I was starving… you could see the hunger in my face…
and you filled me… ever so secretly… you touched and noted my every need… like a master magician you made illusions appear…
come to life… just to make my day…
and now… out of the blue…
I finally understand… as all the puzzle pieces fall into place…
the hundreds of verse flowing from my heart… the compulsion to say…
are all about you…
over and over… the same thing… my subconscious memories I buried alive…
the same someone… the same man…
the same control...
we’re two different kinds… and sides… you and I… of the same soul…
the faster I ran… the farther I’d go… my emotions you took and twisted so slow…
now today… every beat of my pulse… takes you straight back to my head… to my heart…
still loving you… missing you…
craving a brand new start…

:heart::heart:©AthenaRose01/04/13:heart::heart:

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Fri 01/04/13 06:30 AM
In my opinion you should really try and publish your poems............this one i guess is the best so far as it touched my heart the most.........please keep writing hope to read more of your writings soon............have a nice day and Happy New Year :)

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Fri 01/04/13 06:36 AM
flowerforyou flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers

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Fri 01/04/13 07:27 AM

In my opinion you should really try and publish your poems............this one i guess is the best so far as it touched my heart the most.........please keep writing hope to read more of your writings soon............have a nice day and Happy New Year :)


Thank you, harsh... for your kind words... may this new year be everything you wish it to be too... flowerforyou:heart::heart:flowerforyou

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Fri 01/04/13 07:28 AM

flowerforyou flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers :thumbsup: flowers


Thank you, Jeff... flowerforyou:heart::heart:flowerforyou