Topic: I love you too...
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Fri 03/22/13 02:11 AM
I Love You Too
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If you say it is
I know that it’s not
You picture it like this
Because you forgot
I’m just a fool
Whose heart can’t be bought

I look inside
And my eyes do see
My tongue latches on
The words that you speak
Before I chew them
They’re guiding me
Back to you
I choose
My breath
Yours to breathe

Trying to fight it
Our war
You have won
My life in your hands
Our lives just begun

United souls
Together are undone
As new life springs forth
More in love we become

I try to imagine
Time without you
Only seconds I count
The moments are few

Forgive me my weakness
Forget my wrongs too
Just remember life’s frailty
And that...

*I love you*

:heart: ©AthenaRose 03/22/13 :heart:

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Fri 03/22/13 02:24 AM
Nice poetry thanks for advertise but it is real.

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Fri 03/22/13 10:33 PM
flowers :heart: :heart: flowers

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Fri 03/22/13 10:42 PM
Edited by KiK2me on Fri 03/22/13 10:58 PM
{Long Applause !}
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Nicely said Athena !


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Fri 03/22/13 10:59 PM
:smile: :heart: :thumbsup:

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Sat 03/23/13 12:09 AM
Thank you guys for reading and responding to my work, as always I do appreciate your taking notice...

Sinner :heart:

KiK drinker

Penny flowers

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Sat 03/23/13 02:11 AM
Nawww...just beautiful too...:heart:

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Sat 03/23/13 02:21 AM

Nawww...just beautiful too...:heart:


Ainjel... :wink: flowers