Topic: Was Ever Life As Meek As Mine bu DuKord (aka VentaB)
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Sat 10/17/15 09:14 AM
Was ever life as meek as mine?
Herded to persuasion.
Cowered by belligerent storms,
Abstaining provocation.
This world, this mire, these bitter pills,
This barming pot of cultural ills.
Violated minds, tilted wills,
And cleansing correlation.

I seek no fight in lieu of peace,
No assertive conversation.
Contemptuous preaching to the lay,
Or coercive meditation.
This world, this cage, this itching lair,
Of seedless glory, ripe despair.
Cast the peace, and leave me there,
In tranquil isolation.

mysticalview21's photo
Fri 10/23/15 11:08 AM
not sure why some of the other writers have not posted ...
your writes are very good ... flowerforyou

VentaB's photo
Mon 10/26/15 01:06 PM
Edited by VentaB on Mon 10/26/15 01:08 PM
Thank you flowers

EquatorialDaSh's photo
Mon 11/09/15 02:11 PM
Your writing is good. In addition, this poem is quite thought-provoking, to me at least.

jarviep's photo
Mon 11/09/15 08:51 PM
Very good. Interesting.