Topic: Signed, with love
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Wed 02/10/16 01:03 PM
Edited by joethebricky on Wed 02/10/16 01:05 PM
A tale set

Hundreds of years before

Adapted by lovers forevermore

Tragic but romantic, loved by all

They met by chance at a ball

A story told in every famous theatre hall


You know my favourite love song

It's about these two, how love can grow

If only I could sing that song, from underneath your window

The famous balcony scene

They swore their love was true

So this is my bad attempt at a poem, but I wrote it just for you


I'm not quite sure how to finish it

No words could ever express

That feeling that I have inside, I'll let you take a guess

Like the song says, the dice was loaded from the start

And yes it's true, you exploded in my heart

So as it's nearly Valentines

I thought I'd ask, without regret

Would you do me a favour please, and be my Juliet



Signed, with love:heart:


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Wed 02/10/16 04:18 PM
Soooo lovely and romantic......

Hi Joe,waving

I always look forward and enjoy your poems.
You are really good.
Thank you for posting .:smile: flowerforyou


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Wed 02/10/16 07:07 PM
Oh joe, that was so romantic. Send this poem to the ladies... if they haven't fallen in love with you yet, they will.. I promise.

Love it. Love it. Love it. :heart: :heart: :heart:




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Fri 02/12/16 03:10 PM
:heart:

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Wed 02/17/16 04:42 AM
:banana: :thumbsup:

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Tue 02/23/16 03:30 AM
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Tue 02/23/16 07:18 AM
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Fri 02/26/16 08:12 AM
A beautifully sculped poem,straight from the heart a bullseye joe
theresa