Topic: Romantic
goldenhinde's photo
Tue 04/19/16 07:37 PM
I'm sitting here, feeling pretty good
I know how it goes, so I am savoring it
Like how I make a candy bar last
I don't dare tell everyone this
I have a bit of guilt
That I feel good, when someone else feels bad

I had it in my head, what was romantic
I thought struggles were romantic
Against all odds, romantic
Suffering, romantic
The strong, dark, undertow
Romantic
To drown together

The unromantic truth is
Survival and happiness do not need
The energy of a chaos
Destructive, a hurricane, that rips
Hearts to pieces
Makes all reason, the droplets sprayed
From slit arteries

I am reevaluating the concept of
Romantic

SitkaRains's photo
Tue 04/19/16 07:52 PM
Very Nice

Sher_Tenn's photo
Mon 05/02/16 04:55 PM
not sure of the exact quote.. but it goes something like
All good marriages are the same
Each bad marriage is different..

Give me one of them dull boring good marriages..
The ones that have found real romance..:-)

mzrosie's photo
Mon 05/02/16 06:57 PM
Good one, golden flowerforyou


Ladywind7's photo
Tue 05/03/16 02:33 AM
Uh huh. So many people need to get this. Great writing golden. flowerforyou

cjmazey's photo
Wed 05/04/16 10:15 PM
This make me cry. I love you.