Topic: Should I?
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Tue 12/04/18 08:25 PM
Should I make a wish,
Upon on a falling star,
Or ask for a gift,
As Christmas is near,

Should I take a risk,
And ask for you,
As my wish, As my gift,
Coz I hold you so dear,

Should I light a candle,
Let it burn bright,
Be positive,
Our misunderstandings,
Will all clear,

Should I honestly tell you,
How I feel about you,
Or let you go,
This is my only fear,

Its months now,
Yet you still on my mind,
You the only reason I am waiting,
The only reason I am still here..


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Tue 12/04/18 08:31 PM
Beautiful poem. Love is in your heart. Hugs :)

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Tue 12/04/18 08:34 PM

Beautiful poem. Love is in your heart. Hugs :)


Thank you smile2 :heart:

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Tue 12/04/18 08:35 PM
I can't help but feel an upbeat tone to this poem, even though it's about doubt. There's an underlying sense of hope which makes me really like this poem.

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Tue 12/04/18 08:45 PM

I can't help but feel an upbeat tone to this poem, even though it's about doubt. There's an underlying sense of hope which makes me really like this poem.


Thank you and you are right. I was feeling hopeful when I wrote this. Must be the Christmas season smile2

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Wed 12/05/18 10:21 AM
Thats pretty good:wink:
How long you ben writing for?

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Wed 12/05/18 12:03 PM
Edited by Jasmine on Wed 12/05/18 12:10 PM

Thats pretty good:wink:
How long you ben writing for?


Thank you. Have always been writing but with long breaks. Last time I wrote was 6 years back. Started writing again from July this year and posting here on forum.