Topic: Wonder
Krytikal's photo
Wed 12/05/18 05:31 PM
'Wonder'

Can a Gull describe the beauty of a dove
Can a worm describe the features of the wispy clouds above
Or a nut explore the essence of its tree
Do they often wonder how they came to be

Do the raindrops ever wonder why there falling
Or the willow wonder why a willows green
Will a winter want to know why its a winter
Will a branch remember all its fallen leaves

Can a daylight ever feel a ray of sunshine
Does a meteor recall the length of space
Will a moment ever know when its a moment
Or the tide tell the existence of a wave

Can a mountain ever get to see a mountain
Can a rock consider why it has a face
Or a wonder wonder why it is a wonder
Will it ever wonder why it has a place

Written by Tamihana Te Whetu(Krytikal)

technovative's photo
Wed 12/05/18 06:23 PM
A pleasure to read. Skillfully composed piece.

Krytikal's photo
Wed 12/05/18 11:00 PM
Thank You Buddy

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Fri 11/18/22 11:35 PM
'Wonder'

Can a Gull describe the beauty of a dove
Can a worm describe the features of the wispy clouds above
Or a nut explore the essence of its tree
Do they often wonder how they came to be

Do the raindrops ever wonder why there falling
Or the willow wonder why a willows green
Will a winter want to know why its a winter
Will a branch remember all its fallen leaves

Can a daylight ever feel a ray of sunshine
Does a meteor recall the length of space
Will a moment ever know when its a moment
Or the tide tell the existence of a wave

Can a mountain ever get to see a mountain
Can a rock consider why it has a face
Or a wonder wonder why it is a wonder
Will it ever wonder why it has a place

Written by Tamihana Te Whetu(Krytikal)

N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E :thumbsup:

JulieABush's photo
Sat 11/19/22 12:47 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Laska Paul 's photo
Sat 11/19/22 05:37 AM


Just OKAY, becoz its artificially made.