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Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Wed 11/03/21 01:00 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3170	Wed 11/03/21 03:25 AM
Nice .

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Wed 11/03/21 08:34 PM
thank you Julie for your appreciation.

Riverspirit1111 Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 100738	Wed 09/14/22 07:26 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions. Very expressive and nice poem. You should write more of them.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Wed 09/14/22 09:00 AM
Thank you Riverspirit,

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 47719	Thu 09/15/22 12:29 AM
Wow! Nice to read A new poet on the rise! Life is moving Lines are daring Lot of impression Lovely narration

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 09/15/22 01:10 AM
Thanks Vibes, I wrote this last November and had forgotten all about it until Riverspirit dug it out of the archives.

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54099	Thu 09/15/22 02:07 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions. NICE wahhhh

Unknow Joined Thu 01/06/22 Posts: 129	Thu 09/15/22 02:22 AM
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Riverspirit1111 Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 100738	Thu 09/15/22 02:27 AM
Thanks Vibes, I wrote this last November and had forgotten all about it until Riverspirit dug it out of the archives. You're welcome, hahaha. I went into the archives to re-read the other two you wrote and found this one. I missed it back then.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 09/15/22 02:31 AM
Thanks Robin and Hametino.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 09/15/22 02:33 AM
You're welcome, hahaha. I went into the archives to re-read the other two you wrote and found this one. I missed it back then. Well you got me back, you're making me blush this time.

Riverspirit1111 Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 100738	Thu 09/15/22 02:48 AM
You're welcome, hahaha. I went into the archives to re-read the other two you wrote and found this one. I missed it back then. Well you got me back, you're making me blush this time.

AαƚHҽҽɾα Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 3536	Fri 09/16/22 02:23 AM
I love my life, I hate my life I'm where I'm at 'cause I've chosen this path. There is cause & effect, it starts with choice. I desire truth above all, get in knowledge, get understanding, then obtain wisdom to use your knowledge and understanding. I feel hurt, I feel pain. I hear people's thoughts, I hear their words. Human souls want, want,want. The body wants now, lusting evermore, the mind wants satisfaction to full fill the body's lust, however the Spirit directs me to love without conditions. @Mike, it's really an adorable piece of work I loved the wisdom behind the depth of reality that's portrayed with elegance

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Fri 09/16/22 02:34 AM
Thank you Aatheera, it was a way to release anguish of a joyful loss. The joy is back now.

AαƚHҽҽɾα Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 3536	Fri 09/16/22 02:37 AM
Thank you Aatheera, it was a way to release anguish of a joyful loss. The joy is back now. Happy for you

Unknow Joined Thu 06/25/20 Posts: 6	Fri 09/16/22 06:18 AM
atheera I think u r confused

AαƚHҽҽɾα Joined Sun 08/21/22 Posts: 3536	Sun 09/18/22 07:52 AM
Happy for you @Mike I had considered the second line of yours and related it with your expressive and inspiring participation in forum threads for the past few days and that made me wish my happiness for you never felt anything else, I'm sorry if I was wrong.. Please continue spreading the happiness to all of us, we definitely need inspiring people like you to make the forums lively @Roni - wondering, I didn't knew you anyways thanks for letting me know.