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Topic: The pack
David Michael Joined Wed 01/19/22 Posts: 47	Sat 03/19/22 10:30 AM
Mother, wolf does not ingnore her cubs cry with delight, but with teeth and claw does fight. A macob display of horror. Her. Ravinous teeth do tear and devourer flesh, with bloody bite and gore. She. Provides sustenance Allowing replacement of lactic nectar. She. Fierce beast and tender protector,. She. Returns to silence her whimpering pups. Her. Unselfish act of beautiful submission. Her. Sacrifice that is the source of cubs fragile life. His , Wounds go intended received from members or his own pack. Hungry and in heat. desperate from famine and strife. The politics of the pack fall on.Him. It is his duty to protect his, Wife. Father. David Michael Goad II

David Michael Joined Wed 01/19/22 Posts: 47	Sat 03/19/22 10:32 AM
rough

David Michael Joined Wed 01/19/22 Posts: 47	Sat 03/19/22 10:34 AM
for my dear friend Vibes

David Michael Joined Wed 01/19/22 Posts: 47	Sat 03/19/22 10:58 AM
Revised for Vibes. "THE Pack" Mother, wolf does not ingnore her cubs cry with delight, but with teeth and claw does fight. A macob display of horror. Her. Ravinous teeth do tear and devourer flesh, with bloody gore and bite. She. Provides sustenance. She. Feasts, Allowing replacement of lactic nectar. She. Fierce beast, and tender protector,. She. Returns to silence her whimpering pups. Her. Unselfish act of beautiful submission. Her. Sacrifice that is the source of cubs fragile life She. Ever so dedicated to preserving their precious existence. His , Wounds go intended, received from members or his own pack. He. Starving all alone. They. Hungry and in heat. They. desperate from famine and in heat. He, Fights. Exhausted day, and inglorious night. The politics of the pack fall on. Him. unremunerative, and forgotten. Love is his payment, and his plight. His. Duty to protect his, His. Wife. She. Mother. He. Father. Together We... Are Life. David Michael Goad II

David Michael Joined Wed 01/19/22 Posts: 47	Sat 03/19/22 11:03 AM
still needs work, but it's close. I hope you enjoyed seeing a bit of my creative process.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3168	Sat 03/19/22 12:51 PM
Nice poem .

Aatheera Joined Sat 01/29/22 Posts: 7161	Sun 03/20/22 03:59 AM
So nicely written about the courage, wisdom and responsibilities of the She and the He which when bonded finally as a family becomes a Pack of togetherness. The importance of He and She illustrated here was the highlighting essence

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 47701	Sun 03/20/22 04:22 AM
The pack The reality The responsibility The reasons The liability The assertiveness The possessiveness The basic character The need to be a family The deeds of members together The love and affection The way to strive Remarkably depicted! The humaneness in animals Is to be learnt by humans a lot.

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