Topic: Viking and the Little Alpha
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Mon 08/22/22 09:53 AM
Edited by Unknow on Mon 08/22/22 09:54 AM

Whispered thoughts
Leave
Residue
Incased in spiders web.

Hope flutters
As heart's
Rhythm
Beats upon
Its shrine.

Bound bloody upon
Gossamer wings.



22 August 2022






JulieABush's photo
Mon 08/22/22 12:39 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

Riverspirit1111's photo
Mon 08/22/22 12:49 PM
I Love it!! :heart:

technovative's photo
Mon 08/22/22 01:02 PM
An image rich expression that is a treat to read, Storm.

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Mon 08/22/22 02:18 PM
Thank you, everyone.

Devo1974's photo
Mon 08/22/22 03:24 PM
Very impressive Storm!! :thumbsup::thumbsup:

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Mon 08/22/22 04:02 PM
Thanks Devo.

Poetrywriter's photo
Mon 08/22/22 10:36 PM
I don't usually comment on poetry but I love this Storm!

Laska Paul 's photo
Mon 08/22/22 10:55 PM


When did you start writing Poetries StormMessages.
I never knew about your Talent that you have kept hiding within you . I hope other poets read this and give their valuable COMMENTS !! That's All from me right now . Keep Writing .!!

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Mon 08/22/22 11:28 PM
Whispered thoughts
Leave
Residue
Incased in spiders web.

Hope flutters
As heart's
Rhythm
Beats upon
Its shrine.

Bound bloody upon
Gossamer wings.



22 August 2022

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Tue 08/23/22 01:36 AM
Thank you, Poetry.

Hi Paul. Ive been writing since I was 12-13. The death of a friend twas the catalyst. Thank you for your comments.

Thanks Robin.