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Topic: The Futility of Salvation
technovative's photo
Wed 10/19/22 06:05 PM
Edited by technovative on Wed 10/19/22 06:24 PM
Head above waves when I walk on stilts
and cloud the sea spray stirring the silt.

When the wiseguy's shoes tug on my legs
dragging me deeper this diver begs
a mermaid to share air with a kiss
to resuscitate the tanks with buoyant breaths.

Lifting me slowly from the murky depths
light shafts glint off her iridescent scales,
beams a shade brighter every thrust of her tail.

Pierce through the surface turn my head and see,
a cement mixing thug lurking waiting to sink me.
Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Wed 10/19/22 11:15 PM
Edited by Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ on Wed 10/19/22 11:18 PM
U:cherry_blossom:N:cherry_blossom:I:cherry_blossom:Q:cherry_blossom:U:cherry_blossom:E :thumbsup:
:cherry_blossom:Poet Technovative:cherry_blossom:
JulieABush's photo
Thu 10/20/22 03:28 AM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .
AαƚHҽҽɾα's photo
Thu 10/20/22 04:45 AM
Thoughtful and interesting :sparkles: Loved it :star2:
technovative's photo
Thu 10/20/22 12:38 PM
Thanks for your time and interest folks. I appreciate your feedback.

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