Topic: 🖤😄Imagination😄🖤 | |
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HEART
Don't Ask Me Anything My Mood Is Not Fine__eaa. A Incident Happened Today, The Heart Got Crack__errr. The Day Was Refreshing, Setup Of With Mind__aaa. Thinking For A Glance, Suddenly Clicked Brain Winds__aa Decided To Go Out For A Walk__aa Their Was A Bus Stop, Just Nearby The House__aa Opened The Door And Stepped Out__tttaa. The Sunlight Little Bright, Felt Like Reddish Sight__aa Between Monsoon Peaks, Wonder Like Rain__sss Still Made Up Mind Sharp, Won't Carry Umbrella Aside__ee No Idea, What's Gonna Happen Next, In Short Period Time___mm Just Ahead Of Little Distance, As The Leg's Left Right Pass__ess. In Few Moment Of Walk__kk Reached Opposite Street__tta By Facing Was Bus-Stop. Eyes Gotta Rocks__sss Seeing A Beautiful Girl, Standing Alone, Very Nice__ee. Watching The Beauty, Full Offf Glance_ee The Eyes Over Beauty, With Musical Trance__aa. All Of Suddenly Thunder Got Strikes__sss Skies Up Charged, Rainfall Took Starter__rrr Slowly Her Dress Got Covered Up By Rain Drops__ss Beauty Got Load Water Coloured Float, In Glancing Dress Spice__cc Looking Her From A Miles, Into Her Eyes & Smiles__ss Decision By Heart, Don't Mess-Up The Chance. Decided To Acompany Her, With Dancing Road Cross__edd Tragedy of Life__faa As Happiness Short Size__aa Crossing Street Reached Bus-Stop__paa We Only Two In Sequel__sss Suddenly Came Villain On A MotorBike__aaa The Beauty Sat With Him Holding Tight__tth In A Minute Of Wise__eee Flew Away With Glides__ss Mood Off Of Heart__aa Along Left Moment Of Thoughts__ss🖤 Don't Ask Me Anything My Mood Is Not Fine__eaa. Funny Short Pocket Story Of HEART ......Robin |
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Well written Robin
Looks like a rap song too Bringing in humour along with the flow isn't easy, you've sequenced it well I enjoyed this |
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Imagination
Nice in narration Clear in composition Starts with exhilaration Ending in exasperation Thoughts of orientation True with determination Based on beautification Bounding in inspiration Good write☺ |
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ThankYou
Aatheera & Vibes |
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I know you have taken good effort in writing this poem. In Short and Sweet words : YOU MADE MY DAY ...! That is Why I Call it " A BEAUTIFUL SUNDAY " . |
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Nice poem .
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ThankYou
Laska Paul & JulieABush |
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