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Topic: Dream Girl
Eein Joined Thu 06/29/23 Posts: 28	Thu 06/29/23 11:20 PM
A beach at sunset. A girl never met. Her eyes are as a radiant blue diamond sparkling with reflections of the light and memories of a man she hasn't met. Wondering where he is, as she contemplates her life and hart in a world gone astray. She longs for him to appear and bring the wonderment she desires. Her world is fading. The light is dimming. In the distance she sees him. She starts running to him. The light fades more. In a house somewhere. A man wakes.

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 47719	Fri 06/30/23 12:03 AM
Nice writing Good start and best end Let the dream come true

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3170	Fri 06/30/23 01:06 AM
Nice poem .

Blondey111 Joined Sun 01/27/13 Posts: 8910	Fri 06/30/23 02:01 PM
Serendipity I love this !!!

Gia Joined Fri 08/05/22 Posts: 7258	Fri 06/30/23 09:13 PM
Beautifully written.

theresa Joined Fri 06/04/21 Posts: 8	Wed 07/05/23 03:51 PM
A beach at sunset. A girl never met. Her eyes are as a radiant blue diamond sparkling with reflections of the light and memories of a man she hasn't met. Wondering where he is, as she contemplates her life and hart in a world gone astray. She longs for him to appear and bring the wonderment she desires. Her world is fading. The light is dimming. In the distance she sees him. She starts running to him. The light fades more. In a house somewhere. A man wakes.

theresa Joined Fri 06/04/21 Posts: 8	Wed 07/05/23 03:52 PM
This is a magnificent and inspired poem. thank you, theresa

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