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Topic: Hugs
Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 08/10/23 02:27 AM
Disappointment rules, desire drowned! Confusion attacks, frustration abonds. Lion's roar, silenced for now. Tending flowers, so delicate, and fragile. Taking steps, choosing path. Alone, grateful, yet hurts. Will she water, my thirsty soul? How many petals, five or six? Stitching the tear, in my heart. Listening to Spirit, will I hear? Cleave to her, don't let go? I want my hug, no time to spare!

Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54099	Thu 08/10/23 02:41 AM
New Poet Raised Will The Matter Handle With Care... NICE

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3170	Thu 08/10/23 03:13 AM
Nice poem .

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 08/10/23 03:17 AM
Thanks Robin Thank you Julie.

StormMessages Joined Thu 07/27/23 Posts: 2801	Thu 08/10/23 03:19 AM
Nicely written! Thanks for sharing.

Riverspirit1111 Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 100738	Thu 08/10/23 03:57 AM
Your poems have a way of making me speechless. It's very heart felt. The sadness of inner turmoil brought a tear to my eye, I know it well. Thank you, Mike

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 08/10/23 05:11 AM
You're welcome and thanks for your comment Stormy. You're welcome too River, and thanks for your comments River.

Riverspirit1111 Joined Wed 06/27/18 Posts: 100738	Thu 08/10/23 05:27 AM
You're welcome Mike

Vibes Joined Mon 05/31/21 Posts: 47719	Thu 08/10/23 05:51 AM
Really spiritful Rhythm wonderful Reasons admirable Randomly sensible Nice poem !

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 08/10/23 05:59 AM
Thank you Vibes.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Thu 08/10/23 01:42 PM
A warm open-arms expression, Mike.

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 08/10/23 02:28 PM
Interesting comment tech, didn't see it as that, but now I do. Your comment combined with River's sums it up well. Thank you.

Morticia Joined Mon 03/21/22 Posts: 1655	Thu 08/10/23 02:29 PM
Nice one

Unknow Joined Mon 09/13/21 Posts: 31823	Thu 08/10/23 02:30 PM
Thanks Morticia.

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