Topic: Would I ?
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
I would hold her in the dark of night, I would hold her all day long, but somewhere in the spark of fight, she said that I was wrong, I would give her all the stars and the moon upon the sky, but somewhere in the night, she found another guy, that is why I find a tear, streaking down my face, that is why you find me here, I search for love upon this place. |
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juju2680 Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 96 |
very nice.
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Hotchikita Joined Tue 02/20/07 Posts: 1813 |
beautiful words Slow hope you find your right girl.
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
Thank You...I already have,I'm just here for friends.
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
this poem won a contest for me in high school.
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karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 9993 |
Very nice read. Well written.
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
thank you Karmafury,
nice avatar,where did you get the dragon pictures? |
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Gryphyn Joined Sat 10/28/06 Posts: 3047 |
The judges weren't wrong it is a great poem.
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
Thank You Gryphyn,my teen years were very tough on me,
I had just lost my sweet heart a week before this was written. It was inspired by pain,and the need for a good grade. |
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Morena350 Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 13849 |
nice poem slowhands, hummm can I copy this one?
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
Thank You Morena,
yes you may copy this poem if you wish, just words on a page at this point. |
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spay Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 3886 |
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devin112 Joined Wed 10/25/06 Posts: 3727 |
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SlowHands Joined Sun 03/18/07 Posts: 88 |
are you two joined at the hip or what?
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devin112 Joined Wed 10/25/06 Posts: 3727 |
DONT KNOW ABOUT HIM,BUT I AM CHILLIN.
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spay Joined Wed 09/27/06 Posts: 3886 |
*TAKES NOTES FOR THE GEESE TO GANDER*
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