Topic: Long Lost...
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
***Came across someone I never thought I would see again, this came out of the sight.***
------------------------------------------------------- I saw you again tonight, Over at the table across the yard, I noticed you glanced my way, Our eye's once again did meet. We almost acknowledged each others presence, Almost like we once did with happiness, But I fear the hate was far too much, For you, for me it was the ten ton hammer of shame. Long lost, years ago this faded. Long lost, I fear I'll never find it. I still caught the glow in your eye, As you sat with your girlfriends chatting, You seemed intent on my direction, I could apologize again, but it went nowhere the first time. You almost looked happy, But like me you were missing something, I could tell in your prolong stare, Or maybe I was just wishing. Long lost, years ago this faded. Long lost, I fear I'll never find it. Long lost, years ago this faded. Long lost, still to this day I remember it. This dagger won't relinquish its sting, Long lost this heart that once cared, This blade is soaked in what is left of my soul, Long lost... |
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iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 21023 |
What you did,nt hear when she was looking. Was her envey, of you now. And her knowlege now of her knowing you have moved on. Past her, wink. Nice write man.
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
QUOTE: What you did,nt hear when she was looking. Was her envey, of you now. And her knowlege now of her knowing you have moved on. Past her, wink. Nice write man. Perhaps. Thanks mate. |
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MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 87648 |
QUOTE: ***Came across someone I never thought I would see again, this came out of the sight.*** ------------------------------------------------------- I saw you again tonight, Over at the table across the yard, I noticed you glanced my way, Our eye's once again did meet. We almost acknowledged each others presence, Almost like we once did with happiness, But I fear the hate was far too much, For you, for me it was the ten ton hammer of shame. Long lost, years ago this faded. Long lost, I fear I'll never find it. I still caught the glow in your eye, As you sat with your girlfriends chatting, You seemed intent on my direction, I could apologize again, but it went nowhere the first time. You almost looked happy, But like me you were missing something, I could tell in your prolong stare, Or maybe I was just wishing. Long lost, years ago this faded. Long lost, I fear I'll never find it. Long lost, years ago this faded. Long lost, still to this day I remember it. This dagger won't relinquish its sting, Long lost this heart that once cared, This blade is soaked in what is left of my soul, Long lost... |
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
Thanks Mirror.
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nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3533 |
great writing!!!!
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
QUOTE: great writing!!!! Reading it back to myself...it is actually not all that good writing-wise, that is the problem with writing you can't envelope too many differing emotions into it or it won't come out right. This was more of a simple 'what was on my mind' type of write. |
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2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 6250 |
very nice write
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MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 21761 |
Whats on my mind writes are usually our best of writes
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
Thanks, as always your comments are much appreciated.
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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817 |
Powerful write! Ty for sharing it.
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
QUOTE: Powerful write! Ty for sharing it.
Thank you for your comment.
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pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 5670 |
We always think these things when meeting someone from our past...how can we not? Your words relayed the feelings-but did they ever completely fade away? Great write Fear.
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FearandLoathing Joined Fri 12/28/07 Posts: 20012 |
QUOTE: We always think these things when meeting someone from our past...how can we not? Your words relayed the feelings-but did they ever completely fade away? Great write Fear. Love doesn't fade away...it simply dies off. Thank you for your comment.
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