Topic: Love died today
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greeneyedlady42 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 888 |
It was time to let things go No more strings around my heart A decision I struggled with for so long That almost tore me apart It was 11:54 this morning When love quietly slipped away; Taking one last shallow breath As I bowed my head to pray, Many memories left behind Of the days when love was strong And I found comfort and safety In the arms where I belonged But love on mere memories alone Just cant be sustained So as time went by you see Only the memories remained- So with a sad heart and fond goodbye I bid my love farewell As it was buried some where deep In its cold and hardened shell. Its time to cross over now And stand on solid ground Bury what’s been dying for so long To go where hope is found Here lies love that was true But finally laid to rest When It died it was so sad But I gave it all my best. 9-22-09 |
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Ladylid2012 Joined Sun 07/05/09 Posts: 16186 |
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agrant333 Joined Thu 11/20/08 Posts: 1347 |
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wannacuddlewthme Joined Tue 11/11/08 Posts: 5675 |
Nice write
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Holly4459 Joined Sun 06/29/08 Posts: 25081 |
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AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817 |
That is lovely! Nice job
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nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3533 |
wonderful writing...
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MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 87689 |
QUOTE: It was time to let things go No more strings around my heart A decision I struggled with for so long That almost tore me apart It was 11:54 this morning When love quietly slipped away; Taking one last shallow breath As I bowed my head to pray, Many memories left behind Of the days when love was strong And I found comfort and safety In the arms where I belonged But love on mere memories alone Just cant be sustained So as time went by you see Only the memories remained- So with a sad heart and fond goodbye I bid my love farewell As it was buried some where deep In its cold and hardened shell. Its time to cross over now And stand on solid ground Bury what’s been dying for so long To go where hope is found Here lies love that was true But finally laid to rest When It died it was so sad But I gave it all my best. 9-22-09
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severon Joined Sun 09/20/09 Posts: 72 |
I like this, I have one whos never going to be ok,
just hoping it fades. Some are tougher than others. Thanks for this. |
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burgundybry Joined Mon 03/05/07 Posts: 4633 |
Wow! Amazing!! thank you for sharing this
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cherie091279 Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 574 |
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kalunda Joined Fri 06/19/09 Posts: 267 |
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greeneyedlady42 Joined Wed 07/26/06 Posts: 888 |
Thanks guys- your feedback is greatly appreciated.
Only write whats in my heart-Glad you liked it. GEL |
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MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 21761 |
A wonderful write
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