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LAMom
Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 25954 |
Darkness.....
Plagued, widespread calamity I saw, pain upon the eyes Was it, or was it the unknown I walked, caged in stone searching, the unknown I saw death amoung the shadows Was it, or was it the unknown Visitation, lay deep within my mind Spiraling thy axis out of control I saw Vision's, accelerating. accelerating. accel,, Was it, or was it the unknown Render me thy shadow I awoke, melted in clay Surrender'd, as ease took light Was it, or was it the unknown |
MisKim323
Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 12256 |
"Was It" would be a great title for this D....nice write
Edited by MisKim323 on Tue 10/13/09 09:05 AM
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burgundybry
Joined Mon 03/05/07 Posts: 4633 |
superb, Denise!
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Fusion99
Joined Thu 07/09/09 Posts: 917 |
QUOTE: Darkness..... Plagued, widespread calamity I saw, pain upon the eyes Was it, or was it the unknown I walked, caged in stone searching, the unknown I saw death amoung the shadows Was it, or was it the unknown Visitation, lay deep within my mind Spiraling thy axis out of control I saw Vision's, accelerating. accelerating. accel,, Was it, or was it the unknown Render me thy shadow I awoke, melted in clay Surrender'd, as ease took light Was it, or was it the unknown  
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smiless
Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 13599 |
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jimz
Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
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kc0003
Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 5201 |
you and your mind are missed
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carold
Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 12577 |
Good girlie,
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HuckleberryFinn
Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 316 |
untitled or unknown:)
so many questions, so few answers.......much thought, thanks I needed to be confused today...ha ha |
MzEm
Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1445 |
Wow girl, this is great! Very nice work.
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pkd1220
Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 5670 |
(((D))) so great to see you here again
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LAMom
Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 25954 |
Sorry I have been away for a bit,,
Thank you all from my heart to yours Much love I send
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