Topic: Goddess Teacher
brwnkimba
Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1250 |
She's got so much class and schools always in session.
This lady could teach all necessary life lessons. With your blessings allow me to proceed & let you know about a woman purely built for speed. Indeed! I pressured myself into believing that I might eventually get a chance to spend a winter evening. Finding the right path to her heart won't be easy at all. High performance engine under a socialite hoodie that never stalls. Shelter my thoughts I can feel the storm coming today. I walk what I talk so you'll never catch me running away. Fun in the chilly sun and just by chance this miracle out the corner of my eyes elegantly strolled pass. I was stunned like I just actually witnessed a true Goddess. Walked behind her for 2 blocks purely astonished. We passed by a florist along the way I saw her smile at her favorite bouquet. She walked away, but didn't purchase the flowers. I'm like a tourist on vaca always ready to pay to play. I caught up to her Highness, couldn't see her yet but definitely felt her supernatural powers. I must have looked like a lost child needing mom & dad. Holding this floral arrangement inside my gloved hands. Then from behind a gentle tap on my right shoulder came. I turned to my left and the Goddess Teacher supremely reigned. She exclaimed with a smile "Have you been following me"? I explained " Yes but must confess it's your sovereignty". "These are for you with absolutely no strings attached" She's more exquisite than I thought and I'm feeling clearly overmatched. I bowed my head in respect, turned & walked the other way. It didn't go how I planned but still feel good about the day. After all it isn't very common that you get to present flowers to royalty. I'm tweaking a little and trying to make sense of the recent anomaly. I saw a warm looking knitted hat in a store window on my way. Went in to try it on then to the cashier so I could pay. I didn't have the right exact so put the hat back. Went to hit the A.T.M to acquire some more racks. As I finished the transaction on my shoulder another tap. Turned around and it was Goddess Teacher holding the knitted hat. She said " I was so taken aback by your gentle grace & kindness" I responded "Please think nothing of it your Royal Highness". My shyness seemed to be corresponding with her very coy smile. I asked "Where do you come from are you the Queen of the Nile"? She just laughed, grabbed my hand as we walked & talked. I placed the hat on my head and she said I look real sharp. Now feeling like the luckiest man on earth with this Queen. She held her hand in the air and up pulled a limousine. My mouth dropped as a man got out to open her door. The garb of a royal concierge is the clothing he wore. He bowed his head as she slipped into the red velvet backseat. I'm thinking what's next is the car going to run over my feet. He closed the door and she rolled down the window. I'm pretty sure that the limo is hers and not a rental She said "Thank you for a splendid afternoon, I'd enjoy it if we could see each other again really soon". It's so amazing sometimes the way things happen. 1 day your just a sailor the next day the ships Captain. |
HockeyChick
Joined Thu 10/23/08 Posts: 4194 |
nice write
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HuckleberryFinn
Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 753 |
nice formatting, found the couplets very interesting.....
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2KidsMom
Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 25044 |
very nice read
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MzEm
Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558 |
Nice one....but that is what I have come to expect from you BK...
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Differentkindofwench
Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5969 |
My, my, my, this lighter side of you is----------------------well hells bells - It is a pleasure to read! I don't know if you are literally walking on air and grinning at the most mundane of things, but indeed that is the feel and it is lovely to read and feel, you go BO---Y!
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brwnkimba
Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1250 |
Thank you DKOW
 
HockeyChick Pucker-UP 
HuckleberryFinn-thank you (ever since you beat me on the (I) I've been trying to watch it 
MzEm  Thank you my sweet Angel
Edited by brwnkimba on Fri 10/23/09 02:42 PM
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MirrorMirror
Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89693 |
QUOTE: She's got so much class and schools always in session. This lady could teach all necessary life lessons. With your blessings allow me to proceed & let you know about a woman purely built for speed. Indeed! I pressured myself into believing that I might eventually get a chance to spend a winter evening. Finding the right path to her heart won't be easy at all. High performance engine under a socialite hoodie that never stalls. Shelter my thoughts I can feel the storm coming today. I walk what I talk so you'll never catch me running away. Fun in the chilly sun and just by chance this miracle out the corner of my eyes elegantly strolled pass. I was stunned like I just actually witnessed a true Goddess. Walked behind her for 2 blocks purely astonished. We passed by a florist along the way I saw her smile at her favorite bouquet. She walked away, but didn't purchase the flowers. I'm like a tourist on vaca always ready to pay to play. I caught up to her Highness, couldn't see her yet but definitely felt her supernatural powers. I must have looked like a lost child needing mom & dad. Holding this floral arrangement inside my gloved hands. Then from behind a gentle tap on my right shoulder came. I turned to my left and the Goddess Teacher supremely reigned. She exclaimed with a smile "Have you been following me"? I explained " Yes but must confess it's your sovereignty". "These are for you with absolutely no strings attached" She's more exquisite than I thought and I'm feeling clearly overmatched. I bowed my head in respect, turned & walked the other way. It didn't go how I planned but still feel good about the day. After all it isn't very common that you get to present flowers to royalty. I'm tweaking a little and trying to make sense of the recent anomaly. I saw a warm looking knitted hat in a store window on my way. Went in to try it on then to the cashier so I could pay. I didn't have the right exact so put the hat back. Went to hit the A.T.M to acquire some more racks. As I finished the transaction on my shoulder another tap. Turned around and it was Goddess Teacher holding the knitted hat. She said " I was so taken aback by your gentle grace & kindness" I responded "Please think nothing of it your Royal Highness". My shyness seemed to be corresponding with her very coy smile. I asked "Where do you come from are you the Queen of the Nile"? She just laughed, grabbed my hand as we walked & talked. I placed the hat on my head and she said I look real sharp. Now feeling like the luckiest man on earth with this Queen. She held her hand in the air and up pulled a limousine. My mouth dropped as a man got out to open her door. The garb of a royal concierge is the clothing he wore. He bowed his head as she slipped into the red velvet backseat. I'm thinking what's next is the car going to run over my feet. He closed the door and she rolled down the window. I'm pretty sure that the limo is hers and not a rental She said "Thank you for a splendid afternoon, I'd enjoy it if we could see each other again really soon". It's so amazing sometimes the way things happen. 1 day your just a sailor the next day the ships Captain. 
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LAMom
Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26890 |
Life and all its,,, Possibilities are quite amazing,,,
You just feel me with Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,, a pure-ness flows from you,,, Bravo my friend,,, Bravo 
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brwnkimba
Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1250 |
Many Thanks MirrorMirror
My Dearest LAMom If the rain ever seems to show no end just know i'll always call you friend!
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nvkikigirl
Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942 |
such a wonderful piece! thoroughly enjoyed...
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brwnkimba
Joined Tue 05/22/07 Posts: 1250 |
My sweet & kind nvkikigirl thank you soooooooooooooo much
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BonnyMiss
Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15380 |
Methinks thou hast been smitten.......... I'm enjoying the imagery.
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