Topic: Infusion of Metaphor
kc0003
Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 5200 |
They passed by again today
This kid and his dog It is hard to tell which one is in control though A month ago My money would have been on the dog But, as they continue to repeat this daily ritual The boy is gaining on him Little by little... Day by day… The- Alpha Is Changing hands “Heel boy” “Sit”...”Good boy” Oh wait, There goes a cat across the street Down goes the boy!!! All bets are Off...
Edited by kc0003 on Sat 10/24/09 12:35 PM
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MzEm
Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1445 |
LOL
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nvkikigirl
Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3533 |
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meandu2
Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 473 |
"all bets are off" the power of the "cat"...so to speak 
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Differentkindofwench
Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5950 |
Marc wants to know if the dog's name is Marley?
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kc0003
Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 5200 |
QUOTE:
"all bets are off" the power of the "cat"...so to speak
yeah something like that......
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lurchs_sister
Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9211 |
This reminds me of my friend that has ADHD... we tease him about shiny things controling his life.
Thanks for the chuckle Kevin!! 
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EkkoLost
Joined Sun 10/04/09 Posts: 356 |
Haha,POW!
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LoversLyricist
Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 46 |
I like the power of the cat response, very nice. Good piece, fun read.
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HuckleberryFinn
Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 302 |
I think too much....your opening was quite clever, who is in charge, the dog or the boy, ha ha ha, both are wrong and there's the infusion....tis the feline of course....very nicely done
isn't there a song like that why must I chase the cat, must be the dog in me....yippie yi a |
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kc0003
Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 5200 |
thank you for your response...
in this one the boy is life, the leash is structure and control, the dog is man and the "cat"...well, do i even have to explain the cat? lol..or why the dog (man) is chasing it???
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