Topic: I Should Learn To Write
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
I’ve heard it said unrequited love is the fuel that burns the poet’s heart
well, this one is a raging inferno A fiery testament to loves drowning resolve Its flames fan out ahead of my meager words, past all I would view as practical yet, never igniting even the driest of brush I have waited for you, a lifetime Have I not been patient enough? Am I not deserving of your love? Is it my destiny to always live with this burning desire, this, discontented sentiment Then perhaps I should learn to write Become a poet or a blacksmith My heart could heat brands of my own design Glowing red hot verses, I could burn to your eyes Would you see me then? Would you understand? I might compare you to the sunrise if not for the fact that your beauty extends far beyond its rays Or the moon but, there are times when a simple cloud can veil its existence I could tell you that I wish your whispers to rest tenderly on pillows and softly disappear into the quiet of night or that I long to hear your throaty, moans and heavenly sighs echo throughout this room, until they melt away and evaporate into the safety of these thirsty walls Or as others have done; I could use the gentle flowing river, a serene meadow, the vast stars or the common flower and these would suffice, for most But, not for you You are a rarity on this earth and my love for you is more deserving than a cliché More complex than I can explain Yes I should learn to write With you as my muse My inspiration My tablet Words to give you sight Rhyme to lend credence to my phrase Entire books devoted to you, to love Kisses would fall in perfect verse Touch will liquefy resistance and passion will ignite in you that which has forever burned in me my love for you A longing deeply rooted in the sedimentary rock of my bed, my foundation Only then will I become whole Only then will I realize life’s worth and shed this moniker of Spartan I can join the ranks of the living, the loved The men who breathe free The awake I should learn to write For you For me For all those who feel nothing and for the ones that know how I feel without you Without love kc09
Edited by kc0003 on Sun 11/01/09 12:06 PM
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meandu2
Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 490 |
really nice write
my friend you CAN write
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Gossipmpm
Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19068 |
Love it!!!!
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Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 6714 |
mirrored reflections
beautiful |
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Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 22977 |
Nice. I should learn to write, not you.....lol
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
thamk you
david....
gossip....
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
QUOTE: mirrored reflections beautiful thank you very much
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
QUOTE: Nice. I should learn to write, not you.....lol
maybe we can be study partners...lol thank you for stopping in
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Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 2848 |
You should just keep writing...Awesome write...
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
QUOTE: You should just keep writing...Awesome write... awwwww thank you.....
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Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5969 |
Oh my, NOW, I know the meaning of the phrase loquacious to a fault.........
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
QUOTE: Oh my, NOW, I know the meaning of the phrase loquacious to a fault......... so much for subtlety huh? ....
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meandu2
Joined Thu 10/11/07 Posts: 490 |
is that what you call it?
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
QUOTE: is that what you call it?
no she called it i was just thinking aloud...
you are certainly free to call it anything you wish...
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MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22092 |
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
thank you ms. t bear
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pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 10835 |
awesome write your one of my favorites
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MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558 |
Simply wonderful...delightfully complex....beautifully written....Thank you for knowing how to write...
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HuckleberryFinn Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 753 |
You are a rarity on this earth
and my love for you is more deserving than a cliché ^love does seem like a bad cliche' these days does it not...nicely done |
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 20707 |
QUOTE: awesome write your one of my favorites thank you pam....but, we are not supposed to have favorites..
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