Topic: ~ curse
teasingbrunette
Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 1912 |
eyes closed
faint rim of tears listening to rain music on glass curse mind for keepsake lovemaking body remembers aches like the first time every time |
cherie091279
Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 594 |
 You are a great writer...
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jimz
Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1876 |
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kc0003
Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 5227 |
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teasingbrunette
Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 1912 |
cherie..those are pleasing and complimentary words.....thankyou.
jimz,kc0033..back at ya..double..
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2KidsMom
Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 6250 |
nice read
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HuckleberryFinn
Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 357 |
faint rim of tears
listening to rain music on glass ^read like "killing me softly"...loved this insertion, you don't say much, but what you say is powerful indeed... do you remember the first time you made love, I do, it was awesome...so what if I was by myself....lmao that should help the pain subside a tad |
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teasingbrunette
Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 1912 |
2kidsmom...
 nice pill.
finn..women remember everything...laughs. funny you. lovemaking...keepsake..a memory only.no pain. teasingbrunette kc0003..kc0003..got it right! |
pkd1220
Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 5727 |
beautifully done
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teasingbrunette
Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 1912 |
pkd1220..thankyou & a smile.
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kalunda
Joined Fri 06/19/09 Posts: 267 |
 
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Sandcrab
Joined Fri 10/24/08 Posts: 1265 |
Wow, so powerful.
Edited by Sandcrab on Tue 11/03/09 09:56 PM
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teasingbrunette
Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 1912 |
kalunda..tis ok..smile.
Sandcrab..thankyou kind sir. |