they listened,
oh yes they did
heard the echo,
a faint slicing echo
they trembled,
oh yes they did
sh***ing and pissing themselves
in a faint kinda echo
they're all dancing in razorwire
stomping on it
rubbing on it
phuqing on it, yeah!
rot of blood is nothing new
nor the rancid chunks of flesh, all strewn
they're all crawling on jagged glass
chewing on it, yeah
they're writhing all on the floor
laughing there,
oh yes they are
laughing with oh so wide eyes
they hear the echo
an echo of nails
nailed to glass and razorwire
feel the wire zip across the skin
feel the glass grind, grind within
feel the nails pound and pierce the din
'help me, help me please...."
crying tears,
crying an echo of salt
the salt
a burning pain to match burning shame
they're rubbing it in
smashing it in
loving all their in, yeah!
nails pounded in flesh,
jagged glass ground in flesh,
razorwire ripped across flesh,
salt smashed into flesh,
I'm there listening,
I hear my faint kinda echo,
oh yes I do.

Wow man that was slick.

Cool, thanks Cuz I thought maybe it was too gross/graphic to post but what the hell

Great Write!

thanks sir

Help me out here, who are you listening to?

My own guilt.

Ahhh, gotta enough of that goin on here myself, so I'll bow out gracefully for once.