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Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3643	Mon 07/04/11 05:24 AM Eloquent Butterfly A pictorial of a butterfly caught in jagged rain. Obituaries of love, painted in futile skies. Heartache echoes, openly within a inexorable mind. Winds contrive against her aggregated heart. Eloquent butterfly crucified by rain. Drama entangles her insatiable thirst to be loved. A opaque evening cascades upon her life. Faded colors, and fragile wings torn by raindrops. A taboo of mercurial ambiguities. False promises, and lies are in a liaison. Eloquent butterfly crucified by rain. Dancing between raindrops seeking a soulmate. Her eyes relinquish tears, against a tenacious sky. A capricious dilemma of emotional dreams. Graciously she bows before a pretentious reality. Heartache in flight, captured by romantic dreams. Poem: MHS©Copyright 2011 Edited by Up2Us on Mon 07/04/11 05:56 AM

CoRKy26 Joined Sat 03/26/11 Posts: 11	Mon 07/04/11 08:21 AM Wow, I Love it, Truly. Touched my soul. xx

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15044	Mon 07/04/11 08:37 AM so poignant, i think so many can find themselves in there.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 29052	Mon 07/04/11 11:52 AM

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30190	Mon 07/04/11 02:50 PM Very cool man,,,,

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3393	Mon 07/04/11 02:59 PM ..Beautiful..

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3643	Tue 07/05/11 09:49 AM QUOTE: Wow, I Love it, Truly. Touched my soul. xx CoRKy26...Thank you, for the personal email. It's beautiful the thought of touching someone on the other side of the world.... An again, thanks all..... Edited by Up2Us on Tue 07/05/11 09:50 AM

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3643	Fri 08/17/12 08:23 PM Bumping up / sharing a old write....

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 3006	Sat 08/18/12 12:25 AM The imagery it created for me was of a fragile creature surrendering to death, in a world she can never belong to.

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 387	Sun 08/19/12 09:17 AM You encourage my inquisitivness in taking time. Curious and wonderful to read as always

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3643	Sat 08/25/12 03:12 PM Thank you Ladywind7, and poppashroom.....

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 4562	Sat 08/25/12 04:19 PM Up2Us...not sure if i want to be the rain or the butterfly...

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3643	Sun 08/26/12 04:29 AM QUOTE: Up2Us...not sure if i want to be the rain or the butterfly... Love & Heartache walk hand in hand.....

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 29633	Tue 08/28/12 02:09 PM I could feel my good and evil sides..rising..one is happy ..one is sad..loved it.

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