Topic: how woman was made
Joined Tue 10/18/11
What was it like in the beginning
To be man all alone in the world
Days had to be terrible nothing to live for
Nights were worst unable to sleep trying to dream only to wake up to a nightmare
So many long days and nights had to take a toll on his heart
When finally heart ache breaks him down the soul prays to the heavens
So man being the artist
God his paint
And woman the canvas
A work of art was to be created
Man said she shall take form so the oceans waves created her body
The day disappeared to night and man reached out and god gave him two stars to make her eyes
Man and god took a walk in the garden of eden
Man reached hard for the prefect rose to make her soft sweet lips and her tasty scent
But god then asked man a question only he could answer
Will you give up part of your heart so she can have one too
Man without a single thought
Said yes my lord without her I don't even have one
Now that man has woman lonely days are gone and nights well dreams do come true
After you find that someone that has your heart
Joined Thu 04/12/07
That's a very beautiful romantic tale, especially for lovers to ponder.
Unfortunately through the eyes of a single person who would love to have a lover, but for reasons that seem to be far beyond their control and this dream doesn't appear to be within reach, this kind of story only serves to remind them that a large part of their heart will forever be missing.
Of course, there probably is a lot of truth in that.
Just the same, the tale doesn't appear to be so 'romantic' when it appears to their eyes that all the roses have been picked and only thorns remain.
Joined Mon 08/31/09
woman is beautiful,,,
Joined Mon 02/11/08
Beautiful poem , Wildman.
Not exactly according to scripture ,
but still, beautifully written from the heart.