Topic: Joy
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mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 957 |
Joy
Morning . . . cool just before the sunrise coffee camera and patience though the excitement is hard to contain Morning . . . and with the first sip life is just a bit warmer sandy beach blue waves and a hint of light just beyond the horizon I can’t wait . . . well, yeah, I can because I brought patience along Morning . . . an indescribable flame begins to appear stretching its soul like music devouring the senses red blue and white clouds with a hint of joy and the photograph comes alive |
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Peekinin Joined Mon 03/17/08 Posts: 4970 |
feels like a prelude to what I'm about to do A run on the beach as the sun rises over a brand new day
Perhaps he's sitting on a rock, sipping his coffee, camera ready
Nice write |
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pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 3791 |
Nice write reminds me of the time I spent in Florida doing just that. . . Is walk to the beach with my camera And watch the Sun rise over the ocean.
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busokato Joined Tue 12/06/11 Posts: 33 |
Did u swim?
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busokato Joined Tue 12/06/11 Posts: 33 |
Did u swim?
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busokato Joined Tue 12/06/11 Posts: 33 |
Did u swim?
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laura329 Joined Tue 10/13/09 Posts: 112 |
We were both taking a dip. We were debating over what was more beautiful the sunrise or the sunset. But like most things its all in the interpretation...
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mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 957 |
QUOTE: We were both taking a dip. We were debating over what was more beautiful the sunrise or the sunset. But like most things its all in the interpretation... The water was cold . . . but as with all things beautiful, it warmed up just nicely. And my friends, I wrote this piece for laura329. I'm trying to get her to write more since her work is so much better than anything I could ever write. So if you all have a chance please stay on her to share her soul. She really is an amazing poet. |
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tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 28924 |
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LookinRound Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 7894 |
I felt like I was there ~
I can’t wait . . . well, yeah, I can because I brought patience along Nice write! |
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mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 957 |
QUOTE: I felt like I was there ~ I can’t wait . . . well, yeah, I can because I brought patience along Nice write! Thanks for the compliment |
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kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 22674 |
mig...
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