Topic: Feel lost
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shandi69 Joined Sat 03/31/12 Posts: 137 |
Why do i feel so empty,
why is it that my heart aches, it feels like it is bleeding, without your love. Feel i have lost you, feel that you have found someone else, that has made the spark fade, even from my eyes and smile. You seem so distant and far away, since the time i heard from you last, not a word from u in weeks, has made my heart ache for you more. My smile has turned upside down, the sparkle gone from my eyes, with all the pain that my heart feels, cause yr love has been gone for days. I waited and waited to hear from you, not an email or a call to let me know. How you are or whats going on, only the game of guessing whats going on. The thoughts of you run through my mind, your words stain my heart n mind, how caan my heart take this pain, as it build a brick wall again. I never felt so lost ever in my life, the days so gloomy n dark, so lonely, just want to cry all the time, since i lost you all those years without a word. |
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mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 957 |
QUOTE: Why do i feel so empty, why is it that my heart aches, it feels like it is bleeding, without your love. Feel i have lost you, feel that you have found someone else, that has made the spark fade, even from my eyes and smile. You seem so distant and far away, since the time i heard from you last, not a word from u in weeks, has made my heart ache for you more. My smile has turned upside down, the sparkle gone from my eyes, with all the pain that my heart feels, cause yr love has been gone for days. I waited and waited to hear from you, not an email or a call to let me know. How you are or whats going on, only the game of guessing whats going on. The thoughts of you run through my mind, your words stain my heart n mind, how caan my heart take this pain, as it build a brick wall again. I never felt so lost ever in my life, the days so gloomy n dark, so lonely, just want to cry all the time, since i lost you all those years without a word. Very nice piece . . . sad though. |
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Kahurangi Joined Thu 04/26/12 Posts: 1970 |
QUOTE: Why do i feel so empty, why is it that my heart aches, it feels like it is bleeding, without your love. Feel i have lost you, feel that you have found someone else, that has made the spark fade, even from my eyes and smile. You seem so distant and far away, since the time i heard from you last, not a word from u in weeks, has made my heart ache for you more. My smile has turned upside down, the sparkle gone from my eyes, with all the pain that my heart feels, cause yr love has been gone for days. I waited and waited to hear from you, not an email or a call to let me know. How you are or whats going on, only the game of guessing whats going on. The thoughts of you run through my mind, your words stain my heart n mind, how caan my heart take this pain, as it build a brick wall again. I never felt so lost ever in my life, the days so gloomy n dark, so lonely, just want to cry all the time, since i lost you all those years without a word. Heartfelt & raw... |
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jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 1531 |
You can feel the sadness in this read
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2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 29361 |
This.....Heartfelt
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shandi69 Joined Sat 03/31/12 Posts: 137 |
thanks everyone... I wrote this poem an ode to a very special person i lost and will never stop loving...
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