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Topic: Alcogoddess

totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 22875	Fri 06/15/12 02:02 PM A lustful kiss upon the lips erases all innocence her perverted touch caressing in ways that shouldn't be known so young and pure in mind and soul the abuse has taken its toll mature thoughts transferred through the abyss as confusion floods the air

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 29542	Fri 06/15/12 02:06 PM Perfection.

totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 22875	Fri 06/15/12 02:09 PM TY :)

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3393	Fri 06/15/12 03:20 PM Wow.

totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 22875	Fri 06/15/12 03:21 PM

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15044	Fri 06/15/12 05:29 PM that was a hard read for me, just because there are some things we should never have to write about; but you did that very well totage

totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 22875	Fri 06/15/12 05:57 PM TY, there's some things we shouldn't even have to imagine in our worst nightmares that have become a very unfortunate common thing now a days. Though we can choose to appreciate the beauty of the rose, we can't help be notice the smell of the manure that fertilizes it.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 3006	Fri 06/15/12 10:12 PM Words cannot express my horror that this is an experience you had. I adore you and I know others here do also.

totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 22875	Fri 06/15/12 10:14 PM Aw Ladywind, I adore you as well. :*