Topic: Alright! I'm ready for some constructive criticism!
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
I'm just curious to see what people think of my profile? Feel free to leave a comment. Thank you!
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singmesweet
Joined Mon 07/28/08 Posts: 25445 |
As you've already stated in your profile, it's basic. I'd remove that line and add more to your profile. Tell us about yourself, what you like and what you're looking for.
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
Now that you have mentioned it. That particular three word sentenced really looked bad! haha Perhaps it does need some sprucing up,much appreciated.
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singmesweet
Joined Mon 07/28/08 Posts: 25445 |
As of now, there really isn't much to rate. Good luck.
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
Alright, it has been tweaked. Now for the rating (grabs popcorn and sits patiently)
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blueeyes2000 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 1505 |
Well,your elbow looks kinda nice,lol
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
Now that you mentioned it... well I guess you just mentioned it! haha
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blueeyes2000 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 1505 |
hahaha
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singmesweet
Joined Mon 07/28/08 Posts: 25445 |
Try adding more pictures that let people see what you look like. The ones with other people don't allow people to see you and your main picture doesn't really show you well.
Your profile is still very short and doesn't say much. Try expanding it a bit and writing more about yourself. |
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PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 8955 |
My guess is you are "an active fun guy who can apply himself to getting the job done. A grad form your alma mater is cooking on all four burners." Feel free to plagerize.
But no more than you would make a recipe with out being sure you had the ingredients or set up a plate with "eye appeal" you need to think about organization of your thoughts =Paragraphs and pictures that promote you not a trip to the refrigerator. You need a smileing engageing head shot for a lead. A goof ball can be a perfect match long term but you don't want to scare them off before you get out on the first date. A red head lighting is critical so make sure your coloring doesn't get burned out. Good luck; oh by the way you get a hot date from this help I like my eggs poached. lol |
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
Wow, that was pretty good. Time to get ahank you for the input new mug shot and do some tweaking. Thank you for that.
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
Poaches eggs it is.
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2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 29437 |
Strong chin..Welcome to Mingle2
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hawkmasters Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 243 |
Thanks 2kidsmom
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