I walk alone in the dread of the night
and hide during the light of the day
i see people pass me by as if i
was nothing but a mere object
i see them leading a normal life
and yearn to have one myself too
but how unfortunate i am because
they are alive and i am dead
there is no light but darkness in my path
and my life is nothing but a untold tale
of utter grief and only sorrow
all i need is a ray of hope and
a helping hand to pull me out of this darkness
i walk alone in the dread of the night
and hide during the light of the day


please do tell me how it is i dont know first time i am posting my writing

Poetry moves, touches, inflames, inspires etc. Your poem has touched me and caused me to FEEL sorrow for whomever it is that walks like a living tomb in your poem.

harsh2019......writing comes from many places,i like it...looking forward to your next write....teasingbrunette

Great anticipation waiting for you to post,
Your write did not fail you, well done my friend.

Thanks to all of you for inspiring me i was really nervous about it ill try and write much better next time but i can never be as good as you all :) but i will try :)

Really liked it.
Heartfelt.
Please continue writing.

thanks soooo much i really really appreciate all the views ill do my best to write other one soon and that too better than this one

This was great..I look forward to reading more..

thanks so much i am eager to find a new topic to write on :)

Great write....

really really appreciate it hope u like the new one i wrote