Topic: Pain that surpasses
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Thu 04/08/21 08:15 AM
http://youtu.be/vEE3RQUogFo

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Thu 04/08/21 08:20 AM
Tears that heal. A message for the broken hearted :heart:

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Thu 04/08/21 08:55 AM
the first 4 lines is enough, from where I stand.

the middle tends to lead as if to convince you of the statement.

then the end gets back on track again.

Pretty good poem. but a touch rhetorical.

In my humble opinion..waving


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Thu 04/08/21 08:57 AM
Edited by Unknow on Thu 04/08/21 08:59 AM

the first 4 lines is enough, from where I stand.

the middle tends to lead as if to convince you of the statement.

then the end gets back on track again.

Pretty good poem. but a touch rhetorical.

In my humble opinion..waving




He is a Master of words. The whole poem needs read to understand it. But thank you for posting :rose: