|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
Wants and Desires
awesome!
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
~ Thankful ~
sweet, I like the part that you're writing someone here
happy thanksgiving
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
the kill song
Oh thank you ainjel and KC, you guys are cool
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
the kill song
QUOTE: for it takes death to be alive ^the realization hit me one day, I thought I was afraid to die, quite the contrary I was afraid to live..... Loved this, and don't all men wish to be shot back into the womb:)...so warm and comforting there...ha ha i like reading stuff like this that you write. it teaches me some. peace |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
the kill song
shoot me
back into the womb so i can start again shoot me when i smile for im so phony shoot the world many times over for it takes death to be alive shoot the will of man if you can find it shoot god and the bullet will fall into your mind if you shoot nothing you shoot yourself |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
dew
chimes of the goddess
earth her fever the sea has swallowed to the down in the velvet meadow the dew of the river dragon keeps the moist evil his eyes down thank you, HuckleberryFinn |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
I'm not coming back no more
QUOTE: I'm not coming back no more Been here since the beginning of time a desolate soul roaming the earth my royalty clothed in torrid rain since the moment of my birth old souls collected along the way begging for eternal release to finally sleep uninterrupted for heaven is a moment of peace another day beckons the morning dew tattered souls cry out in repressed sorrow "the Raven" has once again returned to feast upon the decay awaiting tomorrow....... Have you ever felt that you've been here forever, and you've just realized you're tired....Don't worry, it's times like these I fight the hardest to maintain what little sanity I have left..........This poem was Inspired by my favorite Song Deja vu', by Teena Marie this is my favorite of yours |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
I Choose You
QUOTE: I am only a star of millions in the darken sky. I am not the shiniest one... in the midst of all the attention. I am not one of the most important ones that makes up the Big Dipper or the part of the constellation The Hunter that most people see and recognize. I am that lone star that shines within its own merit... happy to just be a part of the whole universe. My wish is that someone will look up... see me in that star and say... I Choose You. nice write
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
under
what turns
the tables under the sky turned heart sky under paste tears clouds sky under clouds tempest views sky under why fly down from heaven
Edited by jimz on Mon 11/23/09 04:10 PM
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
time.
I thought it was deep and meaningful.
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
Insomnia
QUOTE: I can't seem to fall asleep. And as I stare into the darkness I catch a vision of myself. I can see swirling black clouds hanging low overhead. If I watch for too long, I'll feel the pain. The pain of my own ignorance. The staggering truth I try to hide. I run from myself. But, I know I can't run forever. And still, I try... Hoping one day I'll run fast enough to leave the storm behind. Some day I will reach that meadow on the edge of my mind. The one I've dreamed about for so long. I'll sit underneath the only tree on that cliff. I'll feel the cool ocean breeze, As it blows gently across my soul. I'll take in some deep breathes. Filling my lungs with the clean air that I have longed for. And as the sun sets into the horizon, My eyelids will follow it down. And with a clear mind, My soul will be freed. And then,... I can go to sleep. cool |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
Cherishing an Angel
awesome, of course!
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
the reflection.
QUOTE: a reflection of my troubled past silently watches me, with memories of the entire cast all the people i use to be. & the games i played for selfish gains wearing different masks for every role drinking away lifes joys and pains til it seemed i lost my soul. times gone by, i've changed my mind & got rid of my selfish ways but the reflection wants to remind & bring the darkness of guilt to my days, but i dont regret what i've been through it has made me who i am & given me the knowledge to stay true and be the best man that i can. so i smile and wave to my former self thank him for the lessons &tears i close the book, put it on the shelf as a reference for future years nice |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
dew
the chimes
of the goddess the earth of her fever the ocean has swallowed to the down the afternoon velvet meadow the dew of the river dragon keeps the moist evil his eyes down |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
read and have fun
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
a hole in the moon
the tempo
of ghost on bone a scarlet dripping lemon strings let me get to the sky through a hole in the moon cause i gave the angel a walk in the void so i play as a dead man not even born |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
Gone
QUOTE: I sit and stare out the window The atmosphere cold in here I almost rise to prepare your meal Then my mind comes crystal clear Its been six months since you left home And I grow wearier every day I no longer have things to do for you Nor loving words to say Our girls have grown and live apart These days should have been our own But words were said and deeds were done And I now face life alone When people say you cry alone No truer words were spake My tears have flown a million fold Since your freedom you did take Our friends have all deserted me Tired of my gloom But I cannot change my feelings Of an ever closing doom I`m terrified of life itself It’s the future I fear most Loneliness is a fearful guest And I`m its tearful host I take no joy from anything My books I cannot read As my eyes are failing fast, my dear And to my terror this does feed Because 16 weary years ago Down the selfsame path you went Eventually you lost your sight Your life was broke and bent You went through pain and agony But I walked at your side I held your hand each awful night When you just cried and cried We both fell prey to despondency And I failed you in this time As I tried to cope with three young girls And I forgot you too were mine Forgive me dear for my thoughtlessness As I let you cope with life alone I couldn`t share my time with you So you drifted from our home But If in God you do believe His justice has been swift As I now suffer your old solitude My future blindness is his gift I face this stress alone my love No one here to hold my hand No words of comfort in my ear No touching your gold band My darling friend, I grieve your loss To our tiny family But I wish you well and happiness Where ever you may be Much peace to you, I feel you. It seems as your're writing your heart is starting to heal. |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
~ In dreams ~
QUOTE:
In dreams... In dreams we are near, very near. Right here, laid next to another. Face to face, noses nuzzle tenderly. As we gaze deeply into each others eyes. No fear, no trembling- except with anticipation. In dreams we have known each other, every inch, every moment. In reality we have yet, to lay by side. To know you, to know me. Tenderly, filled with love. Eagerly giving ourselves to each other, fully uninhibited. Deeply love, not just skin... but soul. You wonder if you are what I seek, As I wonder am I what you want. Do we not dream in parallel, Syncchronized. As finely tuned instraments, playing a love ballad as one. To be as one, never part. To simply love and live life together. Caring, sharing, being there for each other. Fully giving ourselves to one another. How hard can that be? Dreams do come true. For if we stop dreaming, we cease living. Come from peaceful slumber my love, to intwine life together... we.
By: ~ Teddy ~ 11-20-2009 Susan, I miss you, hello, nice poem
|
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
Unbreakable or Vulnerable ?
QUOTE: “To love at all is to be vulnerable. Love anything, and your heart will certainly be wrung and possibly broken. If you want to make sure of keeping it intact, you must give your heart to no one. Wrap it carefully round with hobbies and little luxuries; avoid all entanglements; lock it up safe in the casket or coffin of your selfishness. But in that casket- safe, dark, motionless, airless--it will change. It will not be broken; it will become unbreakable, impenetrable, irredeemable.” C.S. Lewis I like C.S.Lewis. Read a few of his books, thank you. |
|
jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 1861 |
Topic:
Morning dew
a toast to a great soul and a great writer
Edited by jimz on Fri 11/20/09 10:18 AM
|
happy thanksgiving
a toast to a great soul and a great writer