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My Tears
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Excellent write...
Yep...sometimes love matures into pain. |
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Topic:
Precious ~A Mule
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Cool pic...
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Topic:
~ sequence
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Sweet write....
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Totally awesome.....thanks for sharing.
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Topic:
~Pink Solaris
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that's how I knew it was meant for me... I find it totally enchanting. I know the other. |
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Topic:
Val
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Thanks for reading tazz....
Thank you MariahsFantasy.... |
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Topic:
~Pink Solaris
Edited by
Up2Us
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Mon 06/23/14 11:41 AM
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Thanks for reading & sharing tazz.....
Thank you teasingbrunette... There's a hidden message on this write.... BTW sorry my site email doesn't work. |
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Topic:
~Pink Solaris
Edited by
Up2Us
on
Mon 06/23/14 08:00 AM
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~Pink Solaris Tattooed memories, silhouette the dawn. Eccentric flowers whisper renaissance. Alleviated doubts, ease tortured moments. Surreptitious emotions linger still. Introspective eclipse ones soul. Nostalgia reminiscents sentimentally. Gentle daydreams rendezvous beneath satin sheets. Bewildered angels airbrush curious skies. Realistic innocence mirrors the wind. Ubiquitous waves echoe upon a glass sea. Notorious moments captured in pink lace. Eloquent satire sails through the air. Taboo kisses relinquished by moonlight sonatas. Tranquility drifts through a pink solaris. Emotionally I'm captured by her elegant pen. Poem: MHS�Copyright 2014 . |
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Topic:
Val
Edited by
Up2Us
on
Sun 06/22/14 09:03 PM
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you cannot know...how my heart needed your words. . |
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Topic:
Val
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...almost... Sometimes you have to read between the lines. Softly between the silence of each heartbeat, my heart whispers your name.... |
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Topic:
Val
Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 06/22/14 07:51 PM
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I could almost hear you saying the words...... What if I wrote about....falling in love with you. Would you hear me saying the words????? . |
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Topic:
Val
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Great use of words Up2.. |
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Topic:
Reaching
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Excellent write....
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Topic:
Val
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One day I'll be able to write something a deep as this Thank you my friend..... Your poems reach farther into the creative literary abyss.....deeper then mine on several different levels. |
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Topic:
Val
Edited by
Up2Us
on
Sun 06/22/14 04:57 PM
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Val Raindrop apologetic obsessions. Perplexed mysteries regress into bewildered torment. Contrite acid trips, meltdown exasperatedly. Time consumes her tarnished rambunctious soul. Twerking ridiculously, blind sunset humiliation. Victimized animation, relinquishing graffiti tears. Persecuted slave chained to a misinterpreted melody. Freedom becomes a pessimistic demoralized dream. Lifes hysterical ferris wheel, suspended between heaven & hell. She's got a ticket to ride, but I'm ok. Silverspoon nerd lost in a zealous Social Media. Her sabotaged exploited heroin homecoming . Vals' alluring exuberant suicidal addictions. Poem: MS�Copyright 2014 . |
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Topic:
~ jeopardy
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Nice write....
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<O>
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Nice write....
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Topic:
cheater
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Topic:
Mingle Ode
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Touching....
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Topic:
Wave Song
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Excellent write....
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