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Entitled
Edited by
Up2Us
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Excellent write.....timeless read on many levels.
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Sentimental fingerprints
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Thank you Ainjel & rhymeblush....
Thanks tazzops.... |
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Winters Onslaught
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I always look forward to your writes.....
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An Old Nun
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Made me laugh....
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~ just once
Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 06/15/14 07:09 AM
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Excellent write....
Your poems are satin sheets across my mind..... . |
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White and Faultless - a poem
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Nice write...
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hmmm
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Nice write....
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Reluctant
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Midnight hummingbird
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Thanks Leigh2154....
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Midnight hummingbird
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that's why it's such a sweet write Sorry teasingbrunette, I should have placed my critique of the poem in a separate post. Thanks again... |
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Sentimental fingerprints
Edited by
Up2Us
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Fri 06/13/14 02:04 PM
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Sentimental fingerprints Sentimental fingerprints upon the wind. Poison burns through her defiant soul. Saxophone memories play out emotional blues. Teardrop memoirs, kiss mystified ambitions. Silent tranquil rainbows, scream out passion. Evening skies melts into disillusioned midnight pictorials. Hazel dawn fingerprints, silhouette each heartbroken thought. Still, she waits...... . |
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Lake monsters
Edited by
Up2Us
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Fri 06/13/14 10:46 AM
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A little off topic, but interesting....
Giant shark eaten by mystery 'sea monster'? Scientists have identified a Great White Shark that was attacked and eaten by something much larger. The otherwise healthy 2.7m-long shark was being tracked by researchers who were studying its movements when it experienced a sudden and dramatic temperature increase before inexplicably plummeting 580m in to the depths. Four months later its electronic tag was found washed up on a beach in Australia around 4 kilometers from where it had disappeared. The research team believes that the shark had been attacked by a much larger animal, an unidentified behemoth that could be something that has never been seen before. Article: http://www.unexplained-mysteries.com/news/267437/giant-shark-eaten-by-mystery-sea-monster |
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Cherry Flavored Lightning
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Nice write....
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Let Go
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Very nice....
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Ambiguous daydreamer
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Thank you...MariahsFantasy
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Windows
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Excellent write on so many levels.....
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Midnight hummingbird
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this is tender-sweet The whole concept is based on a confused..... BLIND hummingbird caught in a rain storm, while attempting to feed at night. She doesn't have a perception of day or night. |
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Midnight hummingbird
Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 06/08/14 11:32 PM
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Midnight hummingbird Abused relentlessly by raindrops. Lightning reveals her beautiful, blue, purple, green, and scarlet. Silk rain soaked flowers plead her case in anguish. Still, Mother Nature turns a cold scornful deaf ear. Her crucified silhouette, framed by a piercing midnight sky. Wings fluttering across callus winds tonight. Poor small tender...Blind midnight hummingbird. . |
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