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Topic:
for got to for get i re gret
Edited by
d4tc
on
Tue 09/13/11 07:49 PM
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i scold myself - if only i listened and did what i intended i would not be in this situation.
i dread to myself - as long as i know where my wallet keys and phone are at i have nothing to worry about. now look at how i poo myself - my wallet is broke, literally broke. one of the two straps on the inside that held it together busted and it is practically useless. even more so seeing as how there is nothing to put in it. now crooked at how i view myself - my keys have been re_turned to there rightful owners. now shook at how i poo myself - my phone is dead. not just dead. but dead. there is nothing to take out of my wallet to bring it back to life. not good how i dread i screwed my health - i know i never should've said what i told myself |
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Topic:
Medusa In Curlers
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POEM TITLE OF THE YEAR AWARD?
YESSSSSSSSS! 
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Topic:
I can't believe I agreed
Edited by
d4tc
on
Tue 09/13/11 07:51 PM
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i imagined myself at your reading. i was the guy standing in the back of the room leaning against the wall with my arms crossed at first smiling after you read it.
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Topic:
Death questions Life.......
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nicely written!
although i confess, it had me yearning for more...  |
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Topic:
Silent Screams
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 she said pencil dck mother fker!  too funny! 
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DON'T LOOK AT ME i don't want you to see this face. it's all your fault you know! it's ALL YOUR FAULT ALL YOUR FUKCN FAULT! go a head! i dare you to escape! where will you go? watch how you break. spin twist snap fall. you cannot escape me. Your face. Your words. YOU canNOT because you WILLnot budge. as long as you hold on to what it is you does. i dare you to step away from me. not just you all four of you at once, in the light of dark i see two of you. secondly, stop following me. leave me a lone, errr. thirdly, in both light and dark i can feel what it is that you think is the real you that mostly protrudes to repe'titously allude your so called human views and of course the forth would be that which never ceases to leave me wanting more no matter how far i try to explore between the lines of love and gore the one that see's this do that where the words never fall flat and always feel naturally unforced moving forth stored inside different parts of me numb blurred somehow this always occurs it gets away from me - but remains a part of me! STOP first, stop looking at me like that i tell myself from my third perpective looking at one reflects my introspectives |
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Topic:
Transient Warp
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cool write man.
welcome to: just say hi!  or its less cool name: mingle2 |
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Topic:
Bounce
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great write KC!
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this makes me think of the movie, pay it forward.
you have a great  vicki.
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thank you
vicki,tazz,sherrie |
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Topic:
Ice Maiden
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 intesively captured & colorfuly put.
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and you will have no time to hate on others..
am i right? now where was i three four five i have lost track as to how many thousands of these i have written in my life. seriously, does it really matter how many? what if i wrote one? what if i wrote one million and one? what if i only wrote one and the whole world loved it? what if i wrote one million and one and the whole world hated all of them? the point is, it doesn't matter. i am not doing this to please you as much as me. i do this to relieve stress. not, to relive it. if you are reading this just know that poetry can be whatever you want it to be. the point is this is intended to get people to think. if what i says makes you happy or sad or mad or frustrated or overjoyed well that is how you perceive it. i have wrote many feelings. i have wrote poetry where every word rhymed. i have wrote poetry where not one word rhymes. i have wrote poetry that made alot of sense. i have wrote poetry that made no sense. i do this because i can. i will never understand people who have negative things to say. i dont want to sound like a hipocrite so at times i myself dont understand this either. what i do know is poetry comes from the heart. whether you are writting something postive or negative or somewhere inbetween. it can be whatever you want it to be. although, if you have something negative to say about someones poetry please do yourself a favor and keep it to yourself. no one wants to see someone elses unneccesary negative comments. it just makes you look like a stubborn prude. and, if you feel the need to vent than feel free to write it under your own subject, not someone elses. |
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Topic:
Older and Wiser
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nice!!
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Edited by
d4tc
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Thu 09/08/11 03:57 PM
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4 Likes 1 Dislike hey Gwen, nice profile sar casm Good Luck trying to find a Friend with your negative attitude. I am sure you might find someone here desperate enough to want to bone you just so they can get off but I can't emphasize enough how far a good attitude can go with finding someone who wants more than just a cheap thrill.  |
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Edited by
d4tc
on
Wed 09/07/11 08:57 AM
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im not a simple man i am more complex i believe we can make love without having sex i think too much yet not enough and when things seems easy they're bound to get tough the water i tread only gets deeper on my darkest hours i find no sleep here i fear my dreams dream day by day with my nightmares being my only escape as uncertanties embrace contain no value pertaining to me i follow my shadow as a simple man i contradict myself twiddling thumbs with these hands i was dealt |
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Topic:
WORTH READING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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.. ! THIS!
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Topic:
kinda grown up still sorta
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Shall we do it right
here right now under this moment of truth ? ?? not hard not hard how is it better oh ufck your hard nipples are simple and nice for a change you look like you like how that hangs claims to be aimed at me after she gets what she wants its a nice windy breeze now how can this be everytime i close my eyes i see different things the same and the same things changes shades instantly oh **** i painted that with an old brush its smiling hush you are better off without me go ahead and forget me dont ever give your two shens about me i write this in every color my poor colored mother is ghastly pale white in comparison to me yEEEEESSSSSSSS! YEEESSS! YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAYYYY! she has her hands full doesnt she? hi mama! what can i say? its little J!J! how are you? they say im O!K! still doing this thing think shrink red green no! wait! wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wait wiat wait what wiat what what wtf. let me say more whores are nasty and i am happening right now i am having needs i could explain lavishly lavishly LaVISHlY your majesty i remember who went where but cant remember why what does i was on one now im on a few wheeeeeeeewwwwW! wheeeeeeeeeeeeE! stilllovepoetry! itswhatslovesme! iloveit2whoahah! thiSanecoolfool! stopdoingthisplz ThX people are funny look in the mirror and make your funny faces you know you have one but your not going to show anyone because you want to keep it to yourselves you shelledfish whatever leave me alone get out of my head you were and still are was and never will be forgotten i cant move on because i cant move on because i dont want to move ON not because i cant move on i could move on any time i want to move on i can i just chose not to for s (still) a (a) f (fact) e (examining) t (tool) y (yeilding) e (experience) Reasons my hearts running on low grade because i cant afford any other way i would love to be brave and dig myself up out of this grave and sit myself down inside a cave & make myself more confident in a suit and tie kind of mentality actually that would be so happening and i wouldn't have to be me old me knowing what it is i know it has to be happening because i say no more where not all can be told i tend to have tendencies that are (3 letter word) lets be hobbies! they never hate eachother! they love what they do! that could be our new race lets do that and get off this planet not saying i have superstitions just i know this ain't right being denied by two lesbians this has to be real mans kryptonite as sure as i can invision if i love how you love this we could be kissin we could go on in on and on about this but really all these happy faces are killing me this is good its making my jaws sore go ahead and plug in that cord come to me get on me show me what we are here for your body has alot of emotion mines meh a little sore lets be different even if it means being unfunctional pull the button everyone pushes them dont be like everyone else she said just be yourself honey and you will grow up to be a fine young man so i did whatever i wanted to do and this is what is happening i have been dealt these cards three of which i could do without but really this is a real game with fake chips but real cash. i could go for the four of a kind or just settle for a straight time for an unnecessary cuss just because ufck wait! whadaya thinks my shrink thinks is happening trust me he cant believe this i dont do what i say i dont say what i do i just run around all dumb like a smart *** confused! Hi Dad (waves the magic finger) forgive me father for i have always made you mad and couldnt understand why but i do hope now that you are thinking differently please for connors safe i guess he heard me not but its fine for now i remember a time when i could look at every situation and laugh it off now i cant tell what the difference is between whats happening now and what happened then and whats going to happen i know this is not none of your business but i think about you so randomly consistent what do you see when you look at me what do you see when you judge me grown ups know so much this was about my father at some point i dont even want to carry on about it anymore and the angels in heaven would play there harps louder to ignore me NOT because they dont love me but because they wouldnt want me to ACT so what is that word that revolves around hate. ah yes, negativity. i eat food that isn't the best of me and im sure you would agree as it seems to strip away the life that i know is meant to be. time for a new thought because i am happening even when i dont know what is happening insincts make it happen when i think i know i can save time if i do this with two hands music is sexy wouldn't you agree damn you are back and you are back to being you try something new one says be different another tells no just be who you are you say whatever that does because right now i dont believe who you are explains what you does i see a junior western bacon burger when your a super star made with love throw me a crumb and i will swim away gracefully say whats on your mind family stop living like a contestant on survivor teach me how to teach and i wouldnt have learned how to master the art of how to play with fire zzz im tired look at the pits we dig ourselves in the positions when we think negatively dont hate on you because your mad others will see that and how would they act gracefully then now where is your lAvISHlY! damn son look in the mirror what happening your growing so fast how much longer will this last i cant forget you as i know you are the light that shows my path you teach me how to do math every day i count as another lost day i will never get back dang son im a son of a gun that is always heated but you will never know this because i can't let you read this or wont let you know it would take a cruel person to show you this maybe even a crueler one to let it go if you know what i've scene it is alot to comprehend the heart anothers heart blah blah blee lets make this more awkward than it already has been my friends where are you (a light shines down a long room with a small group of people at one end) there you are! thank you for being here! thanks for you time and for helping me get through this time of madness you know whats happening now now you get it where as before you had no clue whatsoever how to score this you still dont but you are catching on which is a good thing because some one has to hold this down while my minds gone nuts cookoo! hiHIHOEZcherryOOOOoooooOOOOOoHHHS! lets see what this will do |
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Topic:
HUSH
Edited by
d4tc
on
Fri 09/02/11 04:31 PM
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thanks yous
terry sherrie vicki scoring double points sounds fun but only when im not setting you up! HOW ABOUT A THREE LETTER WORD TO START  pam up2us <-  tazz |
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Topic:
it's the thought that counts
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i heard a scruffy
old man mumble somber sober older vulgar i replied somber? sober? older? vulgar? he replied somber sober older vulgar somber sober? older vulgar? i replied somber sober older vulgar not too sure what you are getting at all i can tell you is im stretched out on cash or i would buy you a beer notta problem the man sighs as he gets up and drags his left leg with his left arm across the street holding his back with his right hand he sits down against another building and mumbles somber sober older vulgar a lady passing by him stops to say can i buy you a beer? no thanks the man replies but would you happen to have something to write with? the woman says no sir im afraid not why do you ask? the man replies because i thought of a poem and i don't want to forget it oh! the lady says how does it go? does what go? the man replies the poem! the woman asks scratching his head and beard up and down with his left hand he says hmph, i cant recall aw, phooey can you buy me a beer? sure thing the lady responds |
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Topic:
So Cold
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i don't know what to say. this write was very well written. im at a loss for words. thank you for sharing.
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