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Wed 09/14/22 02:06 AM
Lovely flow of expressive emotions and it's even more admirable when nature's bliss gets portrayed with the love you hold for the Emerald Eyes ☘

it's making me remember the stir of emotions I had when I wrote the poem - Adorable :eyes:

Glad to see a unique essence in your version that's perfect in your expressive style :clap::star2:

Thank you! that's exactly what I was trying to do..combine nature and shades of green color..you get it each time what I'm trying to express :slight_smile::green_heart:

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Wed 09/14/22 02:03 AM
Thank you everyone :-)

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Tue 09/13/22 03:15 AM
Your emerald colored eyes,
Beautiful as they could be,
Sometimes fiery and blazing like fire,
Sometimes icy cold like deep sea..

Sometimes color of nature,
Light and fresh,
Soft and clean,
Or with sunlight dancing on leaves,
Color appears forest green..

Or peaceful like a lake,
Bluish green and lying still,
Or mischievous and twinkling,
Flowing river,
But carrying a secret within..

Not of this world,
Such beauty is unmatched,
Almost bewitching,
I think they are magic,
Your magic is slowly working..

Your eyes more precious than jewels,
Always changing yet remaining same,
Will we meet for real someday,
Or just in dreams,
Continue playing this dancing game..

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Fri 07/29/22 11:47 PM
Beautiful :bouquet: :slight_smile:

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Thu 07/28/22 04:22 PM
This Poem is so much and almost Similar to that of poems written by Jasmine, Now don't be surprised ?? Ohh!! Its so easy to Find out .!!!

Yeah Jasmine name suited me better lol

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Thu 07/28/22 04:21 PM
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Thank you :-)

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Tue 07/26/22 07:59 PM
:thumbsup:

:-)

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Tue 07/26/22 03:11 PM
Nice. So intense:smile:

Thank you :-)

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Mon 07/25/22 07:02 PM
Neelam, this so beautiful! Reading it make feel in love!

Thank you :-)

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Sun 07/24/22 02:25 PM
Thank you everyone :-)

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Fri 07/22/22 10:12 PM
Edited by Neelam on Fri 07/22/22 10:17 PM
I always dream of you,
I feel my dream would come true,
I wake up each day,
Disappointed and sad,
Wishing I could dream on,
And never wake up,
For my dreams are beautiful,
My dreams are about you..

Years have gone by,
Yet the emptiness remains,
It's a miracle I smile,
While the pain is same,
I think my life is grey,
But it doesn't matter,
I don't miss the hues,
For my dreams are colourful,
My dreams are about you..

I am calm and peaceful,
As I wait for my day to end,
Looking forward for nightfall,
To lie in the comfort of my bed,
Silently drifting into dreams,
Dreams which are about you,
So beautiful, colourful and true,
Coz I am so in love with you..


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Sun 07/17/22 09:58 PM
As always, a kindling version which I relished ❤ Wish I could read them more :blush::rose::sparkles:

Thank you but I like your poems more :-)

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Sun 07/17/22 09:58 PM
a longing filled with pain:disappointed::pensive::persevere::wink: nice:ok_hand:

Thank you :-)

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Sun 07/17/22 03:11 PM
I really resonate with that. Touching. I loved it.

Thank you :-)

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Sat 07/16/22 07:09 PM
Thank you everyone :-)

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Sat 07/16/22 12:44 AM
I think you called my name,
A slight whisper,
A shivering tone,
Yet it doesn't feel same..

A ghost of memory,
A moment left in past,
When decision made,
Future too difficult to see..

And yet again,
Over the last few weeks,
I am hearing,
A longing filled with pain..

Maybe I am going insane,
Yet my hearing is sharp,
I know it's true,
Your whisper sweet like,
Music in the falling rain,
I am hearing once again..