Here is one I did awhile ago:

Oh Lord-

Look at how hard I tried,
seeing everyday how you pry.
Shadows creep the walls with what if's,
the blood on my fist settles this end.
Tapering the strings attached to my shoulder's,
teasing with time and words of the wiser.

Feeble the mind that follows,
limited the time of the river.

Oh Lord, how could you leave me,
leave me alone and shaking.
Dear Lord, why do you spite thee,
dagger in the chest leaves me slain.

The puddle grows, as the sun relinquishes its glow.
Troubled times grow afoot, together we will go.
The water becomes rippled with waves ten fold,
shelf life has become a little more then grown.
The eye leads the trigger and the mind flicks the hammer.
Setup this failure, your very own born heretic.
I traversed the land for answers, you only gave questions.

Feeble the mind that follows,
limited the time of the river.

Oh Lord, how could you leave me,
leave me alone and shaking.
Dear Lord, why do you spite thee,
dagger in the chest leaves me slain.

I am who I am! Accept me as I come!
God or no God I still stand the same man!
I relinquished my blade and stepped the stage!
I've taken this final blow with the stakes in tow!
I am but a man! I am but a man! I am but a man!

***The two line break before the chorus would be the pre-chorus, pretty much a filler to lead up too the chorus (adds length, can also substitute as a solo portion for instruments). The last part is the closure or outro, which again is just filler.

Hey everybody :) are there any songwriters in the house?

I love to sing but i can never write a song past the first or second verse because i cant figure out how to break into the chorus lol..

anyone wanna share a song they have written?

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ok I'm new here so be gentle..what do you think about the profile?

Girls rather choose a bad guy over a good guy?

Just to make sure i keep my man card im gonna spend 50 and tell her it was ten grand!

Can u do me the favor of rating my profile and maybe givin me some advice on it to make it better so I can finally find the girl of my dreams maybe

if i spent 40 grand on a ring she better be the PERFECT WOMEN lol

Before or after tax?

an Engagement Ring?

Ive heard varying amounts, one was up to 3 months salary.

Im thinking 3 months is pretty excessive. Maybe if you work in the third world and earn a dollar a week..

Elsewhere i read a months salary. What do you think, is that too much or not enough?





(And Lisa, dont get your hopes up! im just wondering! haha!!)

should i drink an energy drink? take a klonopin? or take a klonopin and chase it with an energy drink? be seeing you

I'm on a mission to have a girlfriend by the end of Valentines Day....

narcissistic?

do you see yourself as? Scale of 1-5, 5 being very

im lisa 26/f/fl.. new to all of this hope to talk to yall soon and have some fun

lol yes im a poor thing, move along with your bad self

Just pay for whatever & rifle through her purse later on.

I dont mind taking care of the bill about 80% of the time, however I think the woman can pay sometimes aswell, just saying it would be nice, but not what I totally expect.

Ok, I know this is kinda split down the middle but I really wanna know what everyone thinks. Anyways to the point, Ok so if your dating a girl, do you think the guy should pay for every IE going out to eat, movies, drinking ect ect, and if not how long should you pay till its time to be like ok so i need you to bring something to the table, I feel that both male and female should be in a mutual relationship and should take turns paying for outings and such but of course my mom says differently lol

sugar daddy or sugar mama


would you want to be one?