Very nice! ....and then there is the more graphic versions I cannot post here! LOL

Immense passion
Heart Pounding
Lips touch
Feet Un-grounding

Bodies mingled
Hands roaming
Legs tangled
Mind gloaming

Heat builds
Sweat forming
Clothes removing
Intensions conforming

Skin meets
Hair Meshing
Voids filling
Hormones refreshing

Climax achieved
Molecular level
One of millions
No other to revel

Time passes
Growth begun
Sperm to egg
A lucky one

Many possibilities
Yet here you are
You're one in a million
A bright shining star.

With or without the top of the pineapple removed?

Speaking of eyes, I am going to write about your eyes next.

Go ugly early
To save your money
That's what they say
Which is rather funny

No longer drink
What's the use
I have poor eyesight
That's my excuse

Simply look around
Ugly you'll see
Next to her sitting
Just might be me

Began the look
Could not stop
Miraculous Beauty
No way to swap

Courtship long
Years then some
Stay a virgin
Till marriage come

Day arrived
Wedding ring
Church bells
People sing

Weeks go by
Seemed happy
Then started
Change snappy

Her face changed
Morphed it did
Absolute beauty
Complete morbid

Appearance remained
Inside came out
No more heart
Loveable drought

It spout words
Which not kind
Lost forever
Her freaking mind

Its head spun round
Three times at least
I realized
I'd married a beast

She got real crazy
Wrecking for fun
It came to me
Break out my gun

It ran from me
I chased it around
A hiding place
She thought she found

I pulled the trigger
Barrel on her head
I looked down
She was not dead

Up from the floor
She jumped in my face
Clawed my cheeks
Then grabbed a vase

Bashed over the head
It was a stun
Then she reached down
Taking my gun

Next thing I knew
Gun pointed at me
She's got my money
My funeral's at three

Pretty face
Just for now
Deep within
Lives a cow

Hardened mind
Broken heart
Mere sadness
Hatred an art

Empty soul
Lack emotion
Void of feelings
No devotion

Layered thick
Makeup mask
Lies the beast
Take to task

Hideous revolting
That morning smile
Stop that drinking
For a while

TB do you write anything other than these proses? You draw a good picture so it only makes sense that you have applied it else where?

Cheers! You sound like someone who has read one of my poems. I like negative feed back it fuels me for more. Maybe I should piss you off so you'll fire more of like this one?

Force to love
Never to be done
Try as it may
Cannot be won

Love at first sight
Fulfills a dream
Not uncommon
As would seem

Continue desire
Love is there
Take chances
But beware

Grow to love
Might be luck
Patients needed
Heart loose of muck

All have desires
Alone drives mad
Sooner or later
Feel love, not sad

Not playing
What not known
High on pedestal
Placed to a thrown

Desire none of
Cherish same
Ignorance unaware
Playing the game

Claim no part
Leading role
Ahead of all else
No other extol

Deny participation
Cause disadvantage
All for gain
Easily to manage

One sided
Exploit frame
The biggest player
Of the date site game

Drifting melancholy
No thought
No feeling
No emotion
No sight or sound
Relaxed mind
No filtering
Clear mind
is this Zen?

Between the lines
Off from correct
Accept the proper
All others eject

Punctuate always
Make more sense
Break lines apart
Show what is dense

Spell the right way
Know which to use
Appropriate language
Not yours to refuse

Big differences exist
Poetry vs. short stories
Like sand on the beach
To stone from quarries

One follows prose
All into phrases
Other uses versus
Like musical crazes

Then there are quotes
Some people write
Claim it is poetry
To their own delight

It is what you say
And how you use it
Abuse if you like
Just don't be a twit

I don't like to critique anyone's writing but grammar, spelling, and arrangement go a long way if you actually care about what you write. Sadly this sounds like a true story having just happened.

Good one. Now I want to .

R.O.L.A.I.D.S. ....LOL!


Just kidding! It was nice. Keep'm coming I like those.

Spaghetti hair
Bubble gum drop eyes
Peanut nose
Beef jerky tongue
Cherry tomato lips
Cantaloupe skinned face
Dried pear ears
Asparagus fingers
Rhubarb arms
White raisin finger nails
Fruit juice blood
Soda saliva
Baby Carrot eye brows
Ramen noodle facial and body hair
Blueberry pie inner organs
Roast beef chest
Salmon Belly
Ham buttocks
Cucumber _______
Beet _________s
Chicken leg legs
NY Strip feet
French Fry toes
Cheese and seasonings fromunder.

Thank you! I wish I could say my dog was the only pet like that. My cat owns me as well. LOL

Listen to liars
Believe as they say
No pity on them
On judgment day

Most what is said
Needs second guess
Truth sought out
They'll oppress

For no reason
Credit the wrong
No further query
Creating the throng

Inventing news
Stirring hate
No wonder dwindling
Chosen its fate

No commentators
Tell what's true
Biased opinions
News so bleu

Just tell what happened
Do not take sides
Truth and complete honesty
Will never divide

Account for untruths
Accept first wrong
Faith back in place
Facts where they belong

So says the critic
One who cannot do
Ridicule others
Not having a clue

This is good
That is right
No one cares
Of your plight

Point the finger
When you disagree
Ignorant bliss
Is your decree

Speak of things
You know nothing
Believe in others
Who are also bluffing

Jealous you are
Abilities lacking
Just keep quiet
You have no backing