Topic: Sweet and loving dear
Stephycats's photo
Fri 01/19/07 07:04 PM
This is a poem I wrote a very long time ago for the guy I was with at
the time. Some of you wanted to see some of my poetry so I decided to
post this...enjoy...


As I recite this to you
Ill look into your eyes
And tell you,
Your my one and only guy.

Then ill take you hand
Place it inside mine
Tell you how I love you
And how im glad
Your always on my mind.

I know sometimes I dont act like it
But this is what I know,
I cant get enough of you
I hope youll never go.

As I finish reading this
I hope Ive made it clear,
That I will always love you
My sweet and loving dear.

The End

I hope you liked it. Like I said I wrote this a very long time ago. So
if its not very good, I understand, and wont be upset if you dont like
it. All critism is welcome, the good and the bad.

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 01/19/07 07:31 PM
why would we critize something from the heart
it is good keep posting

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 01/19/07 08:58 PM
stephycats...
you wont be condedmned here...
Good Work girl...
Keep posting

no photo
Fri 01/19/07 09:46 PM
Awesom words Stephy gurl keep postin!!

no photo
Fri 01/19/07 09:50 PM
stephy ya are doll-- keep on postin'

karmafury's photo
Fri 01/19/07 10:23 PM
Very well written Stephy. Keep them coming.

michael1313's photo
Sat 01/20/07 05:33 AM
to live and love,and write your feelings on paper...
you only express your heart...

you still with this man?
or is he why you are here???

Good poem...please show us more...
we hunger for words from the heart!!!

Cybear's photo
Sat 01/20/07 04:14 PM
Stephy,was the Bear right or what?You have some of finest folks of JSH
responding to you already.Both feet are in the door(phew).We will not
criticize,we like the word Encourage a whole lot more.I enjoyed this
very much by the way,and I look forward to hearing more,meanwhile enjoy
some of the fantastic Poetry these guys and gals are laying down.I can't
stay out of this forum.Highly addictive be careful(lol)Keep posting and
more importantly have Fun;)Godspeed!Cybear.

Stephycats's photo
Sat 01/20/07 05:20 PM
Thank you all for your kind words, you dont know how much they mean to
me. Oh and to answer Micheal1313. No I am no longer with the guy who the
poem was written for. Sadly he dumped me because he couldnt handle my
illness, and he had some problems with drinking all the time. I was
broken hearted at first because I truly loved him so much, but now I see
it was all for the best. So yes in a way he is the reason Im here. All
my exes are in part a reason why I am here. But there loss as my mom
would say, he everyone heres incredible gain. Cause now you all have a
friend in me, and I hope I have a friend in you all as well.

Stephycats's photo
Sat 01/20/07 05:23 PM
Opps the last line was supposed to say as mom would say, IS your gain. I
ment to say is not he. Sorry about that lol. I guess my pain meds are
making my typing a little messy sorry about that. Just bear with me and
my bad writing lol.