Topic: THE FLAME
Oceanladysea's photo
Thu 03/22/07 01:34 AM
He looked upon the darkness with the sweetness of wine
He beheld her timeless beauty with eyes of eternal life.
He knew the path down which they walked
Was one from which no end was in sight.
And yet he was drawn like the moth to the fire
To her sapphire eyes and flaming hair.
She stood entranced by his dark and sinister stare
She could see the pool of eternal fire deep within his eyes.
He seemed to stare deep within her very soul
And touch the beginning of her being.
Though they knew the path before lay littered with death
The force that carried them was beyond reason or even life.
Like a tide that washed upon hidden shores
They were carried away on the carrion of death
To experience what life could never provide.
As their souls rose beyond the boundaries of earth
The flame that was their very being
Reshaped and reformed into a new creation.
A life that was never imagined
A life that had never been beheld
A new beginning from a nonexistent ending
Never to have been never again to be.

theflame68's photo
Thu 03/22/07 02:14 AM
NICE one!

Sluggo's photo
Thu 03/22/07 02:36 AM
You just like the name of the Poem laugh laugh
Just kidding around with her Ocean, nice one.....

Suede's photo
Thu 03/22/07 04:29 AM
You would do well with romance novels…you should write a book…

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/22/07 09:12 AM
This is very good you should really write short stories
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