Topic: Dreams die
awesomeadam's photo
Wed 09/17/08 06:52 AM
He sits and waits for some type of inspiration
To fuel the lack of motivation
But the passion died
The fire was put out
It burned on long and strong
but the embers just couldn't hold on
Everybody watched on
and suddenly the will was gone
The safest place for him to hide
Buried deep inside his mind
Where his dreams go to die
lost forever in time
When our dreams die
We lose something inside
and we can't hide the pain
the day the passion died

Differentkindofwench's photo
Wed 09/17/08 07:36 AM
Almost has a Dan McClain American Pie sound to it. Well done.

BrooklineBaby's photo
Thu 09/18/08 05:09 PM
Poignantly beautiful and sad at the same time......brokenheart flowerforyou