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doe it sound scary desperate sincere?
please help i do not want sound like any of the above |
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Not at all!! Sounds fine to me, although I'm not a fan of the no games or lies qualifier. IMHO it makes you more of a target then discourages those who engage in that type of behavior.
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I like it!
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Thanks i seem to be attarcting players and liers
i thought maybe this would discourage them But i was told by a good friend there are more players online than good people |
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Thanks i seem to be attarcting players and liers i thought maybe this would discourage them But i was told by a good friend there are more players online than good people That's just the nature of the beast and has nothing to do with your profile. |
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Not at all!! Sounds fine to me, although I'm not a fan of the no games or lies qualifier. IMHO it makes you more of a target then discourages those who engage in that type of behavior. sorry i bad at abbreviations what is IMHO 
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Thanks!!!! that's a relief!
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Not at all!! Sounds fine to me, although I'm not a fan of the no games or lies qualifier. IMHO it makes you more of a target then discourages those who engage in that type of behavior. sorry i bad at abbreviations what is IMHO  In my humble opinion
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It scared me.
 Kidding. Looks good. Just maybe add a few more pics of ya and I think you would be all set. |
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Would get a great score if you delete the last four words of your profile. Sound like a fun person. Upbeat. Your lead photo would go from very good to great if you photo shop out the background as it is very flattering photo. The up the nose angle of the second photo is not as flattering maybe replace it with a full length photo of you doing something you enjoy.
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There's nothing really WRONG with your profile information but there's nothing really attention grabbing about it, either. When the first sentence in a person's profile starts with "my friends tell me" that causes me to lose interest. (I realize I'm not the person you are trying to attract, but it's something I notice a lot with other people. Guys do it too.)
If you are really that outgoing you are probably a good conversationalist--if you have a bubbly personality you are likely never at a loss for words. Therefore I'm guessing that you may have somewhat of a flair for advertising, and there's nothing wrong with applying those advertising skills (making people feel comfortable, humor, keeping a conversation going) to getting nice guys to notice you. The fact that you like sports and know more about sports than the average chick is sort of buried--if it was me, that would be like my first line. Instead of saying, "I'm this type of person" or "my friends say I'm--", start right in with the sports stuff: "I am so disgusted with my team (name of team) because of their poor record this season!" or "Does anybody else wonder if (name of player) REALLY has a hamstring injury?" or "What do you think about (coach) not starting (player)?" "I enjoy watching sports at home in the comfort of my den with a few friends or with the rowdy guys at the local pub, but I would much rather be at the game! There's nothing like watching your favorite team play a home game!" Stuff like that. Those are good and honest pictures of yourself; try to get someone to get a pic of you living it up in a social setting to SHOW that you're a "social butterfly" and the life of the party instead of just TELLING them. Anyway, I hope this information is useful to you. It's all just my opinion of course; feel free to disregard it if it doesn't strike you the right way. Good luck! yours in Chaos, Scarlett |
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It scared me. Kidding. Looks good. Just maybe add a few more pics of ya and I think you would be all set. great thanks |
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Edited by
NURSE2000
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Sat 09/27/08 02:36 PM
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There's nothing really WRONG with your profile information but there's nothing really attention grabbing about it, either. When the first sentence in a person's profile starts with "my friends tell me" that causes me to lose interest. (I realize I'm not the person you are trying to attract, but it's something I notice a lot with other people. Guys do it too.) If you are really that outgoing you are probably a good conversationalist--if you have a bubbly personality you are likely never at a loss for words. Therefore I'm guessing that you may have somewhat of a flair for advertising, and there's nothing wrong with applying those advertising skills (making people feel comfortable, humor, keeping a conversation going) to getting nice guys to notice you. The fact that you like sports and know more about sports than the average chick is sort of buried--if it was me, that would be like my first line. Instead of saying, "I'm this type of person" or "my friends say I'm--", start right in with the sports stuff: "I am so disgusted with my team (name of team) because of their poor record this season!" or "Does anybody else wonder if (name of player) REALLY has a hamstring injury?" or "What do you think about (coach) not starting (player)?" "I enjoy watching sports at home in the comfort of my den with a few friends or with the rowdy guys at the local pub, but I would much rather be at the game! There's nothing like watching your favorite team play a home game!" Stuff like that. Those are good and honest pictures of yourself; try to get someone to get a pic of you living it up in a social setting to SHOW that you're a "social butterfly" and the life of the party instead of just TELLING them. Anyway, I hope this information is useful to you. It's all just my opinion of course; feel free to disregard it if it doesn't strike you the right way. Good luck! yours in Chaos, Scarlett I apreciate your input I am not too good at describing myself. |
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don't walk away from your day job
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