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Edited by
mythicalman22
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Fri 12/26/08 05:18 AM
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there is a madness inside of my brain
it is a sadness denying me sane the anger lingers with the sorrow a strangers fingers offer time to barrow a feeling of confusion is setting in conceiling the illusion thats letting in behind the walls inside my head defined by squals intwined inbed a flicker of hope a shard of sanity the sicker the joke scarred him with vanity |
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Wow, that's incredible. You sound like me sometimes, when I can't sleep...Like now...Great Poem!!
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"there is a madness inside my brain
it is a sadness denying me sane" what great lines 
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Thank you very much I like that line too...
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you have talent beyond measure honey.
you should write more |
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thank you, 2 flower guys for you..
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amazing...I dont have words to describe this one
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nice write
 
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Nice verse...
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