Topic: If i was the water of your bath
ArdentMan's photo
Tue 05/12/09 11:51 PM
I wish I could be the water of you bath I would surround you with mellow warmth liquid lovelike a frolicking/childish wave on the sandy shoreI would dash and break upon the firmness of your bodyengulf and moisten the places I dream of If I were the water of your bath I would memorize each and every muscle and being liquid I would take your shapemold myself to your every curve
your every indentationI would roll on/over/and off your satin skin If I were the water of your bath I would send part of me
to gather in the recess of your navel there my temperature would rise to match yours
and like plants of the sea I would move your body hairs
in and out with the tide created by your movements
playfully i would slosh against your thighs and become very intimate with your nature If I were the water of your bath
i would cleanse you as my ancestors the nile & congo
cleansed your ancestors
but even more when you leave me and pull the plugI would defy the natural order of things and stay and wait
for your naked return

no photo
Wed 05/13/09 12:42 AM
Lovely....flowerforyou

creativesoul's photo
Wed 05/13/09 01:05 AM
Good poem...

If I were the water in another's bath, I would say...

"Get outta here!"..."It's cold and dirty."

ohwell

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 05/13/09 10:21 AM
Love the imagery flowerforyou

MzEm's photo
Wed 05/13/09 12:19 PM
I am digging this.....

AngelLight's photo
Wed 05/13/09 03:11 PM
Quite unique Ardent....welcome to this forum flowerforyou